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Review #1, by awesomepotter Lessons With Dumbledore

5th April 2014:
So I started reding this story today and can I say how impressed I am! I really like this idea plot-wise and I am really enjoying reading it! I can't wait to see where you take this because I really love James and Lily Potter as characters in general, and I love reading about how they would interact with Harry, had they been alive to do so.
Keep up the good work and pleade update soon!
awesomepotter xxx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I'll update as soon as possible but I kinda have some writers block. Don't worry, I'll figure something out.

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Review #2, by MyMyMiss Voldemort's Plans

18th March 2014:
- Voldemort couln't - you missed the 'd' here in couldn't lol A few minor other grammar and spelling errors as well hun, it might not hurt to have someone look over this for you to correct a few grammatical errors.

First of let me just say that I love the plot for this, I haven't ever seen a story where Lily and James have Lived, not while being here on the forums anyway, so 10/10 for plot and creativity.

I really love how the introductory into this story was set with Voldemort first! I thought that was good that you didn't jump straight into Lily/James harry yet. That was really good giving us the idea's in Voldermort's head at the moment, well done hun

Keep up the good work!

~MMM

3/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I know I've kind of been doing this quickly and by myself, so there are probably a lot of grammatical errors. I go over it myself, but it's easy to miss small things. It's great that you like it. I didn't know what people would think if I changed the plot, but I wanted Harry to have some more happiness.

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