20 Reviews Found

Review #1, by katie The Gift of Sight

16th February 2015:
Can't.handle.it.need.more...going... to...die! Haha but really I hope the revisions you were working on are going well and how to see more of the story soon!

Author's Response: Hehehe... Hope you're still coping. I'm nearly done, but it's difficult to finally get that damn chapter done! It's fighting back, apparently.
Sorry for the wait.

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Review #2, by bill The Gift of Sight

26th January 2015:
Hope we see some new chapters soon! Great stories!

Author's Response: I'm trying to get it done. Suffering from major writer block on a freaking filler chapter, none the less. Arg.

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Review #3, by bill Summer Revelations

21st December 2014:
I hope we see the new chapters soon!

Author's Response: Working on it. Hopefully, I will be able to post before Christmas, and if not, New year's eve.

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Review #4, by katie The Gift of Sight

21st December 2014:
Any new chapters coming?!

Author's Response: It should be very soon. I still need to work out a few kinks out of the next bit. I am doing an overall rework of the plotline, to modify a few continuity errors and prepare for the sequels. It should be up for the new year, at the latest

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Review #5, by tadaka The Gift of Sight

15th December 2014:
I've enjoyed all your stories and this one is no exception.

Glad to see interaction with Julie building again. I missed the focus on her that the last story had. She's a good character and you've put a lot into her, so I'd like to see more of her.

There's lots of tension between the students regarding relationships and rivalries. The internal battles within Ian, Kenneth, and Julie are good. Hoping to see more tension build with the "good guys" and the warlocks. There's a sense of danger out there, but it needs some more time on the page. At least I want it to be there more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I was beginning to think Julie was lost as a character! Anyway, Yeah, I avoided mentionning Julie in the beginning on purpose, so that her point of view coming in later would spin the story in another direction.
This Story is hugely based on interactions within the school, and a slow-paced, growing threat, but the warlocks will have more impact, soon. We'll see more of Lilia, too. This is a second act in the trilogy, and it's setting up the third and final act. The stakes will be high, this year, but the growing of the characters is the main focus. But don't worry, we'll get some action very soon.

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Review #6, by In the blink of an eye. The Gift of Sight

3rd December 2014:
Nope, still hate Julie, still don't care what happens to her to the point I'm just going to start skipping the parts shes in.

Author's Response: Well, sorry you feel that way. Thanks for reading, though.

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Review #7, by TB Pains of the Heart

29th November 2014:
While I don't see Julie as a negative character she has been childish, ignorant and hurtfull towards Kenneth. I think to see Kenneth with another girl will give her a taste of what she has been doing to the poor guy.

Author's Response: As you will see in the next chapter, posted to validation today, Julie is plenty aware that she messed up. Things will take time before she can fix this, though. In the meantime... drama!!! :)

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Review #8, by Downward Spiral The Defence Club

9th November 2014:
I'm supposed to hate Robert but I can't because he keeps getting rewarded for his horrible behavior. The one I hate is Julie, so much so that if she ever does get with Kenneth I don't think I'll be able to continue. She's literally everything horrible a girl can be.

Author's Response: Wow... that much, huh? I do find myself in a bit of a tight spot, there. in the original version of the story, Julie was undecided, having failed to have chosen between Robert and Kenneth for the entire first story and still confused in the second. I thought that was dragging on and decided to speed up the storyline regarding her visions by having the visions affect her personal life. I certainly didn't plan to make readers hostile to her... oops. I'll have to work on that. It may not look that way, but Julie isn't evil. She's scared, misguided perhaps, but she had never meant to be horrible. Hopefully the next chapters will help convince you of that. I do like Julie and I don't want her to be the target of hate.

Thanks for your review. Don't hesitate to keep them coming!

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Review #9, by LunacyPotter83 The Wild Snitch

2nd November 2014:
Do You Have Any Idea When Your Gonna Post A New Chapter.

Author's Response: Soon enough... I'm putting it up for validation this morning, hehehe.

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Review #10, by HogwartsAlum The Wild Snitch

3rd October 2014:
I liked it, there was a lot of action and we got to see Julie's feelings about Kenneth. it was a bit short but the action made it worth it in the end. I May be blowing this out of proportion but it seemed like Donahue could have been sending a signal instead of smirking at Kenneth. Like a Slytherin could have been standing behind Kenneth and saw the smirk and attacked him from behind. Oh well whatever way it happened it still made the story interesting. I would beta for you but I only have my IPad and phone so it would be hard to make changes in a timely manner sorry. Alum.

Author's Response: Yeah, Donahue can be a sneaky bastard, when he puts his mind into it. I'm not ruining any kind of suspense, when I say that indeed, Donahue meant for Kenneth to be struck. He didn't time it exactly. He just knew what Venansius was up to, and he's smart enough to know this could lead to a fight. And "accidents" do happen in fights, don't they?
Don't worry about the beta. I'll figure it out, eventually. Thanks for your continued support!

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Review #11, by Fred A revelation, a visitor and a dream…

2nd October 2014:
Julie is an complete idiot and is acting like life is something out of a cheap rendition of Romeo and Juliet. In the real world good people die to protect bad ones much less people they like. So it is amazingly childish to try the so cliché "push them away so they don't get hurt". Since she is so utterly stupid I'm glad she's staying away from Kenneth because he deserves better than a mouth breathing neck beard like her.

Author's Response: In Julie's defence, you have to understand that she didn't make the decision very rationally, but under the constant pressure of the visions she gets. I'm not talking about simple nightmares, here. Visions are very strong and very painful for the one who gets them.
Plus she's sixteen. It is a fact that people aren't at the top of their intellect when they're sixteen.
I'll try and show you she's not that stupid, I swear.

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Review #12, by HogwartsAlum A revelation, a visitor and a dream…

30th September 2014:
Okay that clears up the reason for the mess of a triangle that is Julie's love life. I don't have to like what is happening but I am glad you showed the reason why. Now yo need to show what is happening with Ian's love life. I know Terry is a great guy but he is annoying me with him trying to get Kieran. We'll hope to. See more soon. Alum.

Author's Response: Well, Ian's love life shall be a little more complicated, but, hey, he is a vessel of Chaos, so what else to expect?
Thanks for the review. The next chapter is under validation, currently.

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Review #13, by #ILoveJulie Quills, flowers and tea...

27th September 2014:

Author's Response: The truth about Julie will be out in the next chapter, currently being uploaded. Hang on a for a little while. :)
I wouldn't say Donahue is dimwited. He's definitely a jerk, but I can't describe him as stupid, really... hehehe

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Review #14, by bill The Brotherhood

28th August 2014:
I love your stories! You're characters are awesome! I just wish we didn't have so long between chapters :(

Author's Response: Well, thank you very much for that!
I'm truly sorry about the delay. I'll admit I've been kept occupied by vacation (Away from the Computer for a long time) and when you get back to work, well... you don't have time to write and post. Hopefully, I'll be able to resume a quicker pace. Next chapter is up to validation.

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Review #15, by In the blink of an eye. The Brotherhood

1st August 2014:
I have to say Robert and Julie are actually pretty well matched. Far more so than Kenneth and Julie, in fact. Now that doesn't mean I like them it just means I think they are two not very good people who deserve each other.

Author's Response: Not to spoil anything, but you may have noticed that we haven't seen Julie's side, so far, have we? Not to say that Julie's perfect... far from it. This is coming up soon. one chapter is up for validation and in the next, we'll get answers.

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Review #16, by AIP Alexander The Brotherhood

29th July 2014:
Your trilogy is the most interesting story I've read on the site, every time i see a chapter, it makes my day! i love the way you introduce and build up your story and the way you play with the characters and portray their emotions. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for that. I've submitted the new chapter to validation today, so it should be up soon.

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Review #17, by HogwartsAlum The mysterious guests of Albus Dumbledore

18th July 2014:
Okay I am so happy you have updated this. And congratulations on your move. I hope to see more in this story soon. Still hate the idea of Julie and Rob but I know you have written it this way for a reason.

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. the next bit is up for validation as I speak.
Regarding the story, not to sound too bossy, but you're SUPPOSED to hate Julie and Robert together, hehehe. the reasons will appear clearly in a few chapters.

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Review #18, by Marilyn A trip to Hogwarts and nothing less than a miracle!

12th May 2014:
Love your stories..thank you for writing them

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Review #19, by HogwartsAlum A trip to Hogwarts and nothing less than a miracle!

5th May 2014:
Another awesome update. I hope they continue. I hate that Julie is back with that scum Rob but I am sure that you had them kissing for a reason. Hope that this is continues faster and we can see what happens from here.

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Review #20, by HogwartsAlum Prologue: Among shadows...

25th March 2014:
I am so happy you have started this series again. I know that it will be a while before everything is finished but it is great to have this AU out.

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