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Review #1, by Josette_Phoenix Twenty To Seven

23rd June 2014:
Hey there!! Time for a long-overdue review ;)

I love at the start how we get into Lily's head about wanting to shut out the world, especially with the dresser - I totally get where she's coming from there :P

You've written James really well, too - bursting out an emotional spiel in the Great Hall; and the little funny bits and pieces - Lily putting him in the hospital wing for two days and how he always brings it up, and how she keeps calling him an idiot in her head but doesn't flinch away for the gushy bits - all make their relationship exactly what I pictur it is.

I also love Moaning Myrtle scene - great little comic tidbit. " 'You think you've got it bad ... but I'm dead.' She always tops me there." Is a great line.

Lovely, well-written fluffy read, thanks!!


Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed this little fluffy one-shot! :)

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Review #2, by Kristina1990 Twenty To Seven

20th April 2014:

How fluffy! I love the way Lily runs around the castle trying not to go to the Quidditch pitch, just to end up there anyway.

And seriously: Twenty to seven is the weirdest time. I'm with Lily on this one ;).

Author's Response: Fluff, fluff, fluff!
Hey thanks so much for the review! :D Hehe I imagine James to be a rather impulsive doesn't-make-sense person. :P But Lily being the opposite here, that's why they're good for each other, I think.
Thanks again! *hugs*

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Review #3, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Twenty To Seven

14th March 2014:
For Blackout Bingo.


This was so cute. Lily's confusion over what to do made me want to smile as well as hug her, because it's such a big step for her and you wonder if she'll go through with it, but you also know that it's fluffy James/Lily - she can't not be with James. Nervous excitement, that's what it is. :D

The end was awesome, so adorable. And a great way of them getting together; I can totally imagine James making the announcement in front of everyone then being afraid she won't come. But she did and it was awesome.

I really enjoyed reading this!


Author's Response: Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this! :) It was just a sweet oneshot that came into my head one day. Thanks for your review, Sam!

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