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Review #1, by HEG A New Year

1st March 2014:
HI!
Right so this is a good start to your story. I wonder why Arabella is Albuss girlfriend. I wouldn't expect him to have one especially as he is so shy. But it did mention that.

You've put Arabella IS rather than Arabella WAS.

So they're in fifth year? You've made a very good start on a little insight of what the girls are like and how it is at Hogwarts. You might guess that Lucy has a similar personality as James just looking at that little snippet. Also I get the idea that Ara is quite popular. I quite expected her to be a little lime Hermione when you said that she was supposed to be a Prefect and Hermione wasn't very popular until she made friends with Ron a Harry.

All in all , this was a good chapter,

Like to see more from you,

HEG :)

Author's Response: Hai!!

Thank you Thank you thank you! It is quite the strange relationship, Albus and Arabella. ;)
Ara is one of those smart, and well-known popular people, because she's sweet, you know?
Thanks again!
xox,
LG


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