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Review #1, by HEG Selkies

1st March 2014:
Well this is a good start to your story.

I like the way that you've changed the impressions of mermaids. You usually associate them with being beautiful. You've used excellent descriptive writing. You have a fabulous way with words.

I love the action paragraph near the end and the cliffhanger sentence. I love all different beasts. I, like you, have got that book :).

I hope you continue to write like this,


Author's Response: Thank you very much. I tried my best. And I didn't want to do the sirens, it's overrated sometimes.

Anyway thank you so much for your review. =D

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