5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Willowjay16 Listening

17th November 2015:
I don't like to say this but I am a little upset with you. WHEN ARE You GOING TO START WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER?
Please do it soon.I am dying to know what will happen next!!

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Review #2, by NH Stadler A not-so-casual run-in

14th October 2014:
Hello there!
I just watned to let you know that I think you have a great stroy line going so far! It's such a great idea to write about the relationship between Lilly and Petunia! I am definitely going to read the following chapters as well!

I really really like the banter between James and Sirius and I love that Petunia isn't necessarily an evil old hag but a pretty girl with a sense of humor. Also the line "Why would you try to take out your wand in front of her?" actually made me laugh out loud! I will be looking out for updates :)

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you!

This story is my newest project and I really liked writing these characters, so I'm really happy that you liked them!

Thank you so much for the review and for reading TDOHAWITF! (Which is quite a mouth-full, but I'm searching for an alternative...)


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Review #3, by Chazzie Boggarts - among other things

26th September 2014:
Hi Grey!
Aww, that was so sweet. I loved the interaction between Lily and her friends, and I liked that you have shown the slight conflict with Mary. You've really shown me a different side to all the characters I thought I knew. Lily in the potions class was brilliant, and you caught Sev there too. You even hinted toward him annotating his potion book with Lily's comment about not trusting the book. It was very entertaining to read.
James and Sirius bickering over Petunia worked really well, I thought it was rather rash and characteristic that they wanted to 'wife' her before they even really knew all that much about her. Another great chapter!

Author's Response: HI Lottie!

I really like writing these characters, since there is so little available concerning their lives whilst at school... I love that you like it so far!

Thank you so much for the amazing review, I appreciate your inputs each chapter!

All my love,

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Review #4, by Chazzie Room vs Broom

9th September 2014:
Hi there FenrirGreyback!
What a super story so far. I haven't read anything like it on the forums, and it's a really interesting, original idea. I love your characterisation of each person as it is realistic, and your dialogue is humorous enough to make the reader laugh, but not overbearing in content. I love the easy banter between Sirius and James. It was sweet how the sisters have reconciled, though I am perhaps being too optimistic in my hopes that they will remain friendly.
Do you have a nickname that you prefer to be known as, such as Grey or Fen? Or anything else? Just I hope to be reviewing as the story as it progresses, and nicknames are fun. If not I don't mind, but I thought I'd ask :)

Author's Response: Hi Lottie!

You have no idea how much I appreciate the review - you've made my day!

I was nervous about writing these characters, to be perfectly honest, since so many people have done so in the past. I'm really happy that you like them so far!

Sirius and James are really fun to write, so I guess that that came across in their relationship... if that makes any sense.

I was originally set on making the story progress to Canon, but my first story was AU, and I'm thinking of making this one AU as well - we'll just have to wait and see, I guess!!

I completely understand, my penname is a mouthful, so Grey is fine by me!

Thank you so much for the review and for oficially making my day!

(Grey for short :P )

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Review #5, by TheHeirOfSlytherin A not-so-casual run-in

7th March 2014:
For Blackout Bingo.


It's always interesting to see the dynamic between Lily and Petunia, the different ways people go with their story. Yours is off to an interesting start, and it's an AU story, so I'm learning not to take anything for granted. I have no idea what direction you might take this and it will be fun finding out.

The confrontation between them was sad, I felt kind of sorry for Petunia, to know how she feels about the situation. It's just one thing that's differen - Lily being a witch - but it's changed everything.

The situation between Petunia, James and Sirius was funny and kind of cute, but I couldn't help but wonder how Petunia will take it once - if - she finds out that they're wizards.

oh, poor Lily, hearing what she's honestly like around people. That must have been hard. And then James getting shot down like that. It'll be interesting to know where they go in this story.

I enjoyed this first chapter.


Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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