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Review #1, by Rumpelstiltskin A Brusque Departure

6th March 2014:
I'm here for Blackout Bingo (number 6/7 for square 3, to keep track).

The first thing I want to mention is the amazing imagery. You did a fantastic job at not only establishing a setting, but also setting the mood. The bland colors of gray-scale, the clouds, the smog, the blue turning to grey, black umbrellas, rain, grime and rust, shadows, waiting, even dull tones of voice -- it's really all just perfect to set up your story.

Now, this Felix seems like an oddity to the blandness, all the while fitting in completely. His omelet with toast and a glass of water certainly coincides with the dullness, but he seems to have a spark in him.

Anyway, this was refreshingly unique, and I'm glad that I stopped by and red it. Great job!


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