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Review #1, by HEG The Red couches

2nd March 2014:
Here for the blackout bingo.

This is a good start.

I like the relationship that you've created between James and Lily.

Ooh a straightening spell. That sounds handy.

Maybe you could put in a little more description with the dialogue?

A good chapter,

HEG

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I actually got a read! I figured that my story would go ignored.Thank you so much for reading it! :) Thanks for the feedback too!

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