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Review #1, by Fonzzx Nightmare

11th March 2014:
I really really like this. I'm 99% sure I've already told you this, but you have Ron down perfectly.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ron is my favourite fictional character of all time, so that's possibly the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me about my writing!

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Review #2, by ginnypotter242 Breakable

1st March 2014:
I really liked this story. I liked how it was from Molly's eyes, and everything she noticed about Ron. The reactions were definitely plausible in this story. The nightmares and the being skittish about touching was perfectly described for right after the war. I like how Mrs. Weasley was thinking about how Ron changed, and remembering how he used to be. It made the reactions feel a lot more real, seeing Ron actually change after the war. I'm glad you touched on this part. I see so many stories where the Trio is fine- maybe a few nightmares- after the war ends. You made this a lot more true, how people actually would be after fighting a battle like that. And the bits of Harry and Hermione, and how Mrs. Weasley noticed that even they changed from the few years she had known them was great too. This was a very well- written story, and I'd love to see more of it!

~Sara (For Gryffindor vs Slytherin Blackout Battle)

Author's Response: Hi again and thank you!
This whole chapter was something that I'd been thinking about for a while. A result of reading too many fics where they're perfectly fine, no doubt.
I like to think that Molly always considered Harry and Hermione her kids too, so having her notice those things about them seemed natural.
Thanks again,

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