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Review #1, by Snowtyfy Finally...

8th June 2014:
I just wanted to say that I think this is brilliant. You built up just the right amount of tension. The reader could guess what was coming, but it was exciting. I think it is very interesting that you used a point of view other than Draco or Hermione. That you used Harry was even more interesting. I think one of my favorite parts was the last paragraph. You end your story with one of those thoughts that just sticks with the reader, making us sigh at the end because it was so wonderful that we wish there was more, yet the ending is so fitting that wishing for more doesn't feel logical. I commend you!

Author's Response: Why, thank you =) I very much appreciated your review. It left me smiling.
And I am sorry for the delay in response.


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Review #2, by bookworm530 Finally...

22nd February 2014:
I have always thought they were a perfect match because of how they can challenge each other...which your one-shot displayed beautifully! Wish there was more of course but nicely done!

Author's Response: Thank you =)
And sorry for the delay in response.


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Review #3, by Chazzie Finally...

22nd February 2014:
This was such a cute one-shot! I loved your portrayal of Harry, and I have to say that I love Draco. I don't know why, but he's just so adorable, and it's no wonder Hermione can't help but like him. There was just one thing I picked up on: I think 'peaked' should be 'peeked' instead. But that's a minor error and not too noticeable. Thank you for sharing your story!

Author's Response: Thank you. It shall be fixed. Don't forget to check out "Dreams".
:)


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Review #4, by AppreciativeReader Finally...

21st February 2014:
Finally . a lovely one shot. Funny and it just lifted my spirits.

Loved it.

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