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Review #1, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing The Elemental Secret

1st March 2014:
Hi there!

So, James and Lily? I can never pass up a chance to read one of their stories!

I love that you've managed to build this whole story on the concept of fear... Even though Lily's biggest fear is the storm I think she's also terrified of people finding out about that! A storm is a completely normal thing to be scared of though so I felt able to relate to her.

Your James was every bit as cheeky as he needed to be! I thought you did a great job of letting him be there for her. Bless him, afraid of slugs! Now that's not one I've heard before but I'm not surprised Sirius was calling him a pansy... it sounds a very Sirius like thing to do!

One of the other things I liked about this story was that it wasn't full of a hate match between these two, but it also wasn't all lovey dovey. It was just a sweet moment between the two which shows how they might soon get together!

Great job on an awesome one-shot!

Lauren :)

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Author's Response: Hi,
James and Lily are one of, if not /the/ best couples of all time, in my opinion. So any chance to read or write them is fine by me!
Sometimes I find getting the balance between them to be quite hard, so to know it worked this time, when I was quite nervous about it, is a relief!
Thank you so much!
-Vikki :)

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