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Review #1, by subtle as a brick Denial & Deliberation

5th May 2014:
Katie is my favourite 'Other Canon' - and I think you're doing an amazing job characterizing her. There was a bit of waffling in this chapter (looking for seekers, rather than chasers - a bit of confusion as to what team she's going to be playing on) but overall super well written an I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this story! This story means a great bit to me and will update soon! I will definitely have to go back and edit some of the sections of Quidditch so they make more sense, I love this kind of advice-thank you!!

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