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Review #1, by aurum di angelo Chapter 27: Christmas Conversations

19th September 2014:
great chapter! I love that you speeded up james and genie's im waiting for Al and gypsy's reaction to this! and ron's reaction to scorpius and rose's relationship

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is in the queue. :)

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Review #2, by HarryGinnyLove88 Chapter 27: Christmas Conversations

18th September 2014:
hahh, finally they kiss :D

please write soon :)

Author's Response: It's in the queue!

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Review #3, by suzie3481 Chapter 27: Christmas Conversations

18th September 2014:
Okay so Im happy that james and genie are finally together but i also kinda like them while they were at ends So I thought you should have dragged that out longer.
Is the next chapter in the queue yet?

Author's Response: Next chapter is in the queue. :)

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Review #4, by aurumdiangelo Chapter 26: Tactless Potters

18th September 2014:
I just cant wait for the nxt chapter! plz upload it soon!
and I love your story.. will there be a sequel?

Author's Response: The next chapter has been in the queue for a few days now, so I'm expecting it to be validated any time! :D

I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story... I'm currently writing chapter 5 of the sequel. ;)

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Review #5, by lena Chapter 26: Tactless Potters

15th September 2014:
I love ths whole story you wrote! ♡♡♡♥♥♥

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D

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Review #6, by HarryGinnyLove88 Chapter 26: Tactless Potters

15th September 2014:
gash, this is soo funny story, so good...

james and Genie - hope they both get together soon and Al and Gypsy too :_)

hope you write soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll put up the next chapter right now. :)

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Review #7, by suzie3481 Chapter 26: Tactless Potters

13th September 2014:
I really liked that chapter. I thought it was a nice devlopment for albus and gypsy. But what about the parents were they okay with scorpius being in love with rose? Im also sad that there was no progression in james and genie. Hope the chapter will be up soon!!!

Author's Response: All in good time, my love!
Next chapter up very soon.
4 chapters to go!

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Review #8, by we Chapter 25: That's my cousin!

11th September 2014:
Great chapter as usual!!! But whats going on wIth al and gypsy we never heard about their relationship in a while
Cant wait to find out how this story ends!!

Author's Response: Thanks love!
Gypsy and Al remind me of Ron and Hermione a lot in the almost painful slowness of their relationship...
Having said that, I can tell you that there is a Gypsy/Al update in the next chapter... in the queue now!:D

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Review #9, by kassandra466 Chapter 24: Perfume

7th September 2014:
That was another stunning chapter. As you are well aware I am so enjoying your story. The development between James and genie is heating up and it's wonderful. I also really like how you have portrayed lily. I would like to see more of her. Anyway it was another flawless chapter that show cased your amazing talent. I so so loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much Kassandra!
Next chapter is in the queue. :)

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Review #10, by loved it Chapter 24: Perfume

5th September 2014:
Oh my god, that was such a good chapter! Im pretty much in love with your story! Please update soon! ! And just out of curiosity how many more chapters are you planning on writing/ will there be a Sequal?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you like it... As for the chapters... at this point in time I think it will take me at least until chapter 30 to finish off this part of the story (though I only ever really expected this story to be about 20 chapters long, so who knows!) I have more stories about these beautiful people in mind, so I would say a sequel would definitely be in the works, if there is demand for it. :)

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Review #11, by t Chapter 23: Curiosity

28th August 2014:
Great story but I dont get it. What was the point of that chapter nothing new happened. Just seemed like empty conversation that we could gone without.

Author's Response: It is important to the development of my characters and the overarching story line.

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Review #12, by kassandra466 Chapter 23: Curiosity

27th August 2014:
I loved that James and Genie are kind of getting along and I really love how it began to rain at the end. I so enjoy your chapters and it not only inspires me to write my own fic (which I just recently put up my first chapter, it was a little daunting but seems to be successful) but to write better.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be sure to check out your fic. :)

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Review #13, by kassandra466 Chapter 22: Secrets

25th August 2014:
That was a terrific chapter, I was so excited to see you had updated, Rose and Scorpius just make my heart melt, they are so cute and I am so happy they finally admitted their feelings for one another, My favorite line would have to have been
I donít know what they were doing, but bet you 10 galleons it wasnít potions. Ė G
I was laughing out loud, it was fabulous (as always)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :)

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Review #14, by kassandra466 Chapter 21: The Sixth Years

24th August 2014:
I think that Regina and James will eventually get together, or at least realize that they dont completely hate each other. I have a feeling that Rose and Scorpius are having some 'alone time' haha. I love their friends, as I have said before you have created great character dynamics and they are developing beautifully. I am so enjoying your story. Its been a little challenging for me to get back into Harry Potter fan fic as I have been on whats close to a four year hiatus but stories like yours constantly remind me how much I miss it and why I need it in my life. So thank you for helping me bring back a little magic into my life, I can not wait for more.

Author's Response: You are most welcome :) I stayed away from fan fiction for a good few years too, but found this year that I was really missing writing. Thank you so much for taking the time to review all of my chapters. I hope that you read and enjoy the rest! :) :) You've definitely made my day.

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Review #15, by kassandra466 Chapter 20: Changing Relationships

24th August 2014:
Its all too cute, everyone is just so perfectly matched and your characters compliment each other wonderfully. I am so enjoying your story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you are :)

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Review #16, by kassandra466 Chapter 19: The Hospital Wing Again

24th August 2014:
How sweet, I wish I had a Scorpius, though that line may not work as my name is not shared with a plant, at least not that I am aware of.

Author's Response: I wish that I had a Scorpius too. :(

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Review #17, by kassandra466 Chapter 18: Gryffindor versus Slytherin

24th August 2014:
I knew it!! Haha another wonderful chapter, if I could ask for anything it would be longer chapters, they just feel so short.

Author's Response: This was a short one. I try to aim for at least 1000 words minimum, but doesn't always happen, especially if it is going to jeapardise the quality of the chapter. :)

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Review #18, by kassandra466 Chapter 17: The Potters, Malfoys, Zabinis and Greengrasses...

24th August 2014:
This is so exciting, I love how Rose walked him down, and I have a feeling that James and Regina actually like each other, in a more than cordial fashion.

Author's Response: Sshhh... not sure that they realise that yet!

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Review #19, by kassandra466 Chapter 16: Awake

24th August 2014:
Another flawless chapter, I am so glad that Gypsy and Al made up. Everyone is back to normal! or at least somewhat normal

Author's Response: They couldn't stay mad for long; they're far too close for that. :)

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Review #20, by kassandra466 Chapter 15: The Hospital Wing

24th August 2014:
Awe that was beautiful, I hope that Scorpius' parents loosen up soon and accept the fact that their son is in love with a Weasley

Author's Response: They'll come round. :) In my mind Genie and Gypsy have it harder with their parents.

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Review #21, by kassandra466 Chapter 14: The Potions Accident

24th August 2014:
Well, that was intense. I really enjoyed that. Your characters are gaining more depth. I quite enjoyed it youre doing such a fabulous job

Author's Response: Thanks. :) :)

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Review #22, by kassandra466 Chapter 13: First kisses

24th August 2014:
That was adorable, I liked how it was un perfect as most first kisses are not. You continue to keep things realistic I really appreciate that.

Author's Response: Yep, my first kiss was certainly very, very far from perfect! I'm not giving any of my characters something I didn't get! Thanks for your review. :)

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Review #23, by kassandra466 Chapter 12: Dates

24th August 2014:
Ooh, drama :) I love it. I so so love how nonchalant Rose is about everything it never fails to make me laugh, especially when it flusters Scorpius

Author's Response: Flustered-Scorpius is one of my favourite Scorpius' to write. I think he complements Nonchalant-Rose well. Once again thanks for your feedback!

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Review #24, by kassandra466 Chapter 11: Something to Think About

24th August 2014:
I love that Rose and Scor are getting so close. They are honestly so adorable. I also really like the idea of Albus and Gypsy. They would also be adorable. I love how Rose just decides things and Scorpius kinda goes along with them, it makes me laugh. You have such great characters.

Author's Response: I think of Scorpius like a little puppy following Rose around, completely enamoured with her. He's such a sweetie.

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Review #25, by kassandra466 Chapter 10: The Quiet One

24th August 2014:
I think your relationships feel incredibly natural. As I have said before you write flawlessly, your flow is great. I do not think things are moving to quickly. They are moving at a good pace which may be a bit on the slow side, but other than that its perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks. I would much rather things moved slowly rather than quickly. I don't think teenagers should rush in to anything... especially not with a best friend!

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