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Review #1, by MidnightBlue_x Burning Flames

18th March 2014:
Hi!

Sorry it took me so long to get to this. I had read this back when you first posted it but I didn't get the chance to review until now. Secondly, I'd like to thank you for entry my challenge (and for getting the piece done so quickly!)

I think you did really well writing this, especially since so little is known of Callidora. I would have liked to have seen a little more though, I really liked where you were going with the story!

Again, thank you so much for entering my challenge and sorry for the late review!

x Ely

Author's Response: No problem! I am glad that you liked it and maybe I will write a longer story sometime soon.

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Review #2, by nott theodore Burning Flames

2nd March 2014:
Hi there! Wow, I saw this in the recently added pages when I was looking for one shots to read and review, and I couldn't resist it when I saw who it was about. I'm a real fan of minor characters and I have to be honest, I did need to look up these characters since they're so obscure, but I really enjoyed it.

Since these characters are so unknown in relative terms in the books, I think you did a lovely job of bringing the two of them to life and creating real and believable characters in such a short one shot. I felt almost like they had been focused on more in the books, because you managed to characterise them so well. That is really impressive in writing.

I didn't notice any typos or errors as I was reading this either, so you've done a good job on your editing and because of that the story flowed really well.

The dialogue was well written and probably one of my favourite parts of the story because it felt believable and realistic, so I want to commend you for that as well. It seemed to flow very naturally and I got a real sense of who they were through that.

The romance was a nice aspect and I could tell that the two of them really loved each other in this, which was nice since I wasn't aware they existed or were together before reading this! I liked your last line of the story as well, it seemed to fit in era really well with the story and finish it nicely. Great job!

Sian :)

Gryffindor/Slytherin Battle 5/5

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing.

I am glad that you liked it and that you found their characterisations believable. I had to look up who Callidora was before I wrote it so I know what you mean on that point. When I saw she was related to Cedrella I had to get her in there somehow.


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