5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DracoFerret11 An Invitation on Valentines Day

11th July 2014:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums here to review for you for the House Cup 2014! :D So, let's go over things:

Confusion: I'll start with the one part that I didn't quite understand. Namely, why is FEBRUARY their last month in school? That just doesn't make sense. And why are they having a party in the Great Hall to begin with? Some clarification would help.

Plot: This was quite a sweet story. I really liked that it wasn't all about romance. It was good to see a story more about friendship than about love on Valentine's Day. Hermione and Draco were a lot different than I normally read them, but I didn't mind. Well done!

Characterization: Hermione's personality was very dry in this story, and I loved it. Her sassiness was lovely, and Draco's humor was fantastic. Even though they were much friendlier than I would expect, I liked the banter between them so much that I didn't mind if they were a bit OOC.

Emotions: I think that Hermione's sadness about her grandma was a bit too glossy-over. I liked that she wasn't happy about Valentine's Day, but she didn't seem too sad either. I think delving more into that would help solidify her character. As for Draco, we never really got an explanation for why he didn't want to be around other people on Valentine's Day. He didn't explain it that well, but I wish he had. It would have been nice to understand just why they were feeling the way they were feeling.

I liked the way that Hermione and Draco talked to each other, and I loved that this was a less traditional story about Valentine's Day. Overall, well done! I liked this. :)

--Emily (House Cup 2014 Review)

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Review #2, by Rose An Invitation on Valentines Day

12th March 2014:
Very very nicely written! Definitely a fave! Hope you write more ;)

Author's Response: Thank you :D That means a lot- and yes, I will! x

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Review #3, by Jackie An Invitation on Valentines Day

2nd March 2014:
This seriously made me laugh. I loved the sarcastic flirting. Good job! ^_^

Author's Response: Hahah thank you so much, Im glad you enjoyed :) x

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Review #4, by PreciousAnn An Invitation on Valentines Day

15th February 2014:
I thought it was really good! You gave Draco a softer side, and it was a nice touch. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) x

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Review #5, by ThatGryffindorGirl  An Invitation on Valentines Day

14th February 2014:
I loved that! I loved how you said "Single-awarness day". The whole story was fabulous. I really enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: Haha that's what I call it! Thank you so so much, glad you did :) x

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