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Review #1, by megthechef43 Bears and Macaroni

6th March 2014:
flickachick,

I think you should continue to write the one-shots about their futures. I think it was a great one-shot with a lot of emotions going on between Lily and her friends and how thing progressed with there friendship through the years. I was originally pull in by your title. I was wondering what Bears and Macaroni had to do with each other. I felt bad for Lily because she was feeling so abandoned by her friends but her friends thought she was pulling away from them. It was such a misunderstanding that everyone had. I wish I could have gone in ther and told them to just talk. I'm glad you ended the story on a high note because I wanted things to work out for Lily and her friends. I really like reading stories are disorders. I like that it shows the other side to the problems.

Good job!

Meg

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