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Review #1, by PolyJuice_ Unconditional

13th March 2014:
Blackout Battle~ 9/20 (Whew, still a ways to go!)

Anyway, I loved this story so much! It was absolutely cute and fluffy. The gradual progression of their relationship was wonderful. To go from one time setting to another like this is hard to do without makking it all weird and jumpy, but you managed to do it, and make me feel as if I was still getting the full scoop on their lives.

The line about Rose knowing who she'd go to if Scorpius did a runner, oh sheesh. Rose sure has some confidence in her fiancee, doesn't she? Haha. And I loved Scorpius's wonder at the baby being called a Malfoy, and Rose's flippant attitude to it all.

Anyway, I lvoed this story! Great work,

Liz

Author's Response: Hi!

Whoop for blackout battle/bingo. Go Gryffie's and Snake's :D

To me ScoRose + fluff = the best combination!

Haha, Rose sure does :p Alice has always been there for her, even before Scorp was around. I was a little worried about that so I'm glad you think that it worked out well. I think Scorpius was sure that the baby would be Weasley due to their conversation with Ron (which isn't shown but I had a vague idea in my head) so he's surprised to hear Rose say it, even though she'll should become a Malfoy as well.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!
-Potterfan310


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Review #2, by Lululuna Unconditional

6th March 2014:
Hello! :) Aw, this was such a cute story! :)

"And you're going to be a godmother." One of my favourite parts of this story was the friendship with Alice and how much she means to Rose. Then naming the baby after her was just perfect! I especially liked this line as it was so matter-of-fact and showed how close they were - of course, there would be no question that she would be the godmother.

...she already loved this baby more than food and boy did she love her food. She had her father to thank for that. The Ron references here are just hilarious. I'm glad Rose is a girl who loves to eat, and how she compares her love for people to her love for food - I think we all have those moments, and she feels very relatable. I really like how sassy and sure of herself Rose is here, she's a lot of fun to read about.

Haha, what a way for Scorpius to find out about the baby! :P His reaction and their love showed more comfortable they are around one another. I also really liked the proposal in the snow, and how Scorpius was in his PJs.

Now that was a fun conversation. Oh no, poor Scorpius, having to face Ron's wrath. And poor Ron! I'm sure it took him a while to recover from that. :P But I loved the detail about history repeating itself with Scorpius fainting, and showing how perhaps Ron and Scorpius aren't as different as they think. It made me laugh as well how poor Rose had to cope with going into labour and waking up Scorpius - just a cute, silly little moment!

And the ending was just so adorable - what a perfect story for Valentines Day! This was a lovely little read and I really enjoyed it! :)

Gryffindor vs. Slytherin Blackout Battle, Round 2 - Review 5 of 15

Author's Response: Hey!

Thank you, fluff is something I love to write and so is ScoRose :D

Alice and Rose have been best friends since they were little so it seemed so fitting. That line and the very last one are my two favourites! There was definitely no doubt in the godmother at all or the baby's middle name.

I normally write Rose as slightly like Hermione, but I mean she has two parents! So of course she would get Ron's love of food. Everyone has those moments definitely!

He finds out in an totally unconventional way which I thought was more fun rather than Rose sitting him down and telling him. I think it was the perfect way and like you said his reaction was so sweet and their love is certainly strong! I think the proposal scene was my favourite, as he's doubting how well he knows Rose and then just does it our of the blue when she appears because he loves her and the moment was more perfect that it could have been if he had done it like he planned. As it was just the two of them in the moment and the snow just topped it off and so cute!

Poor Scorpius indeed! Having to face Ron's wrath, I like to think that he fainted as well at hearing the news his 'Rosie' was pregnant by non other than Scorpius :p He and Ron both love Rose and Rose loves them too, they may have their differences due to who Scorpius' dad is but they sure have similarities such as the fainting! Poor Rose indeed, she's about to have a baby and she has to deal with him fainting.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Good luck in the blackout battle, I'm being biased now but Go Gryffindor!

-Potterfan310



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Review #3, by adluvshp Unconditional

3rd March 2014:
Blackout Battle!

I always enjoy reading ScoRose and I really loved this piece. The way you wrote the pairing was too cute. The way Scorpius proposed to Rose was adorable.

I also really liked the moment of Rose making Alice the godmother, it was so sweet. The labour scene and baby's birth was also done nicely. The ending was too cute too - Rose's love for both Scorpius and her baby was unconditional - and I was like awww.

All in all, a very very nice one shot and it really brought a sweet smile on my face. Great job!

Author's Response: Hi!

ScorRose is just perfect and I love writing them.

Thank you! I had so much fun writing this because of the fluff, cuteness and ScoRose.

-Pottefan310


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Review #4, by LightLeviosa5443 Unconditional

20th February 2014:
Hi!

One, I love you for writing Scorose. Two, why does it take me so long to get to reviewing!

THREE WHY DO YOU WRITE SUCH CUTE STORIES! lsdkmf;iedlfreoidkm.

I am in love with your stories, like this one, adorable. You went from her getting pregnant, to engaged to a mum in like 5 minutes and it was so perfect. Ugh. I loved this story. I loved the way that Rose told Scorpius, the way he proposed, the way they told Alice she was the godmum. (Um, I cried at that part you meany)

This was so cute, and that last sentence. You did such a good job on this, and I really love that CI. RYAN GOSLING WAS FOR MY STORY (dead. just dead. i love him.) Well, not my story, but the story for my challenge. Whatever. He's mine, and I'm obsessed and you used him. I got so excited.

That's not even related to your story, oops.

I really loved this, I'm done spazzing all over your story!

Good luck in the challenge!

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response: Hey!

One, Scorose is awesome and cute. Two, I have no idea :p

Three, I'M NOT EVEN SURE WHY BUT IT SEEMS TO WORK :D

Aww thank you!! *Hugs* I have some major love for yours too! I really wanted to drag it out some more but I put a limit on myself and said it's just a one-shot. Rose and Scorpius for life, I mean the hints in the epilogue were enough for me to make it canon.

Those two are just too cute and those moments were perfect, my favourite was his proposal. Hehe, *hands tissues* Alice seemed the likely choice :)

The last sentence, I KNOW RIGHT! Thank you so much, the CI is perfect and now I have a perfect banner thanks to the amazing artists over at TDA! They're the best.

Thank you so much and third place is great :)

-Potterfan310
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Review #5, by Avanell 2 Unconditional

16th February 2014:
Very sweet story. Enjoyed it all :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun writing it.

-Potterfan310


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Review #6, by Midnight spark Unconditional

14th February 2014:
So beautiful... I love this one-shot. Freya really suits her!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had the plunny and I just had to write it. Freya definitely suits her for being born on Valentines day. Thanks for taking the time to review.

-Potterfan310


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