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Review #1, by CantpickwhichWeasleytoravish The Baby Incident

1st July 2015:
It's a great story with imaginative forethought, but now I am crying. You did a good job with twisting the emotions of the writing from sad to hopeful as well.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so happy to know that people are still reading and enjoying this. Thank you for a beautiful review. :)

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Review #2, by merlins beard The Baby Incident

4th March 2015:
Stop making me cry so much... ;)
This was really sad... but right at the end, it turned around and showed a bright future... it was really good.

Author's Response: Sorry for making you cry! But thank you so much for reviewing. :)

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Review #3, by merlins beard The Bra Incident

4th March 2015:
I loved the guessing game. You came up with quite a few strange suggestions...

Author's Response: Wow this one is old! I had to just re-read this chapter myself to remind myself of what happened! :P this was a lot of fun to write... Innocent teenage boys before the world destroyed them. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by Odie The Baby Incident

23rd March 2014:
nice stories behind each picture. what an imagination! thanks for a nice read.

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing this and "Ending". It's great to know that people are reading and enjoying my work. I did enjoy writing this story. :)

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Review #5, by ginnypotter242 The Bra Incident

1st March 2014:

I'm loving this story so far. The little flashbacks into the Marauder's time at Hogwarts are great. Especially when Lily and James still hated each other, it makes the pictures that much more amusing.

Now, why would Lily's Evans' bra be under the stands on the Quidditch pitch? I can't believe James tried it on for 1 chocolate frog. Now, if I was one of the Marauders, I would be holding this against him forever. I loved Lily's payback- being in the right place at the right time always pays off (especially if you happen to have a camera).

I wish Harry had a chance to know exactly what the stories behind these pictures were. I can imagine Lily and James telling the stories- one trying to get the other to shut up, and then speaking up with the next embarrassing story as payback. Harry's definitely right- is parents were very strange. Great job on this story!

~Sara (For Gryffindor vs Slytherin Blackout Battle)

Author's Response: Glad you've enjoyed it. It was not Lily's bra, obviously... I have deliberately left it open because I don't feel that the Marauders had any way of finding out themselves... Some mysteries have to stay open! And in my experience, boys will do anything for a dare! It is a shame that Harry can't know the true stories. I always wished that Remus and Sirius had told him more stories of his parents when they were alive, but I suppose they just didn't have enough time with him. :( Thank you so much for your review!

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