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Review #1, by Your biggest fan, EVER!!!!!! Housemates

28th July 2014:
I'm crying tears of laughter. If I don't leave another review before Sunday, assume that I'm still laughing at the utter adorableness of this. :)

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Review #2, by Felpata Lupin Housemates

27th July 2014:
Another brilliant chapter!

I've been a bit lazy with reviews recently and I didn't leave you one for the last few chapters, even if I adored them... And I was so sad two Sundays ago, when you said you wouldn't update the week after... But it was worth the wait!!!

Draco is settling in! Great! It's just so funny following his train of thought, seeing him compare life in Grimmauld with the Pureblood society he's used to...
And it's cute the way Sirius see himself in Draco and worries for him. I really loved their little chat.

Loved Kreacher, too! Reprimanding Sirius for sneaking off at Marlene's...
BTW, I didn't immediatly realized that he said number 13 and not 12 when leaving from Snape's office... Got me confused for a moment...
I'm so happy about the two of them dating! And it was so funny when they got caught by Remus and Sirius teased him about Dora to divert the attention from himself.

Harry got the Cloak! Was it Dumbledore who sent it to him? And Fred and George gave him the Map as a Christmas present? Or is there some detail I missed or forgot?

Harry doesn't really like the idea of Sirius and Marly together, does he? But I suppose (or at least I hope) he will in time...

"I'm just thinking," Potter said defensively.
"And I don't want to discourage the habit," Draco retorted.
That was by far my favourite exchange in the chapter! So typical of Draco, it made me laugh!

Snape has arrived... Drama coming... Can't wait for next chapter, I'm just too curious!!!

Lots of love,
Chiara.

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Review #3, by JaydeTheSpaz Housemates

27th July 2014:
As always, your writing is wonderful! I love all the little awkward moments, made me laugh :-D

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Review #4, by GinnyPotterForever Answers And Avoidance

22nd July 2014:
It seems like it's been ages since I haven't written a review... And it has been! I can't remember when I last reviewed! With a summer internship and one late night when I started posting my own story (gulp!) free time has been rare.

Love the direction the story is going in...
I think Harry's knowledge of the prophecy is the major turning point of Initiate... As we know, Dumbledore blamed himself for not telling Harry earlier in OoTP, and this really takes the whole story in to a different level.
Not that it wasn't different already.I mean, Sirius is out, Harry has a family, Draco is becoming the next white sheep and Remus and Dora are already together.

Did I mention I love the world you've created? I didn't?
Oh well. I love it!!

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Review #5, by Slytherin Answers And Avoidance

18th July 2014:
Very good so far! Keep up the awesome work.

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Review #6, by HPlover Answers And Avoidance

17th July 2014:
Well, Christmas should be interesting!

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Review #7, by Jillian Answers And Avoidance

14th July 2014:
I absolutely love everything you have written, especially Innocent and Initiate. The stories are refreshing and exciting. I hope you have safe travels.

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Review #8, by DUMBELDAVE Forewarned Is Forearmed

10th July 2014:
OY Yes he is almost back Ugh

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Review #9, by DUMBELDAVE Denial And Desire

10th July 2014:
Ahhh the mirror makes the first appearance Loved it

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Review #10, by DUMBELDAVE Harry And Higgs

10th July 2014:
Ahh crikey Not sure where this goes !

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Review #11, by DUMBELDAVE Fight And Flight

10th July 2014:
What the heck ? What hit Harry ?

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Review #12, by DUMBELDAVE The Marauders

10th July 2014:
Oh this is just wonderful Lots going on lovin this story !

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Review #13, by DUMBELDAVE Midnight Madness

9th July 2014:
Fluffy I presume ! ! ! ! ! !

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Review #14, by DUMBELDAVE Zabini And Benson

9th July 2014:
Good chapter Off to read more !

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Review #15, by DUMBELDAVE Help From The Headmaster

9th July 2014:
Oh crap now what the heck is going on ??

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Review #16, by DUMBELDAVE Lion Hearted

9th July 2014:
I and wait to see what kind of dog he transforms Into

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Review #17, by DUMBELDAVE Time To Talk

9th July 2014:
Oh my Sirius is going to get lucky !

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Review #18, by DUMBELDAVE Slytherin And Gryffindor

9th July 2014:
The twins have the map This could be interesting !!

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Review #19, by DUMBELDAVE A Proper Welcome

9th July 2014:
Oh oh oh my This is going to get good !

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Review #20, by DUMBELDAVE Sorting Things Out

9th July 2014:
Excellent sorting chapter Just brilliant !

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Review #21, by DUMBELDAVE The Professor's Intervention

9th July 2014:
Well we shall see won't we ! ! ! !

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Review #22, by DUMBELDAVE Aboard The Hogwarts Express

8th July 2014:
Oh my goodness a malfoy and a Weasley in the same area and no wand play !!

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Review #23, by DUMBELDAVE A Place To Belong

8th July 2014:
Off to hogwarts then at last !!

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Review #24, by DUMBELDAVE The Break-In

8th July 2014:
Love this story Yes I Do

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Review #25, by ginnypotter242 Forewarned Is Forearmed

8th July 2014:
Hello! This was a really good chapter. I liked that you had Sirius tell Harry about the prophecy, even if Dumbledore doesn't agree. I never agreed with Dumbledore waiting so long to tell him- it just put Harry at a disadvantage.

I loved the little memory with James and Lily. I'm sure Dumbledore could see the resemblance between the Potters and Sirius (and Harry for that matter), and I'm glad that it made him trust Sirius.

The ending was a little creepy- I wonder what Voldemort's up to. Interesting plot twists as always! I like Sirius and Marlene interactions, and would love to see more of them! I love the two of them together :)

Your Transfiguration lesson was interesting. I liked how Harry was thinking about the theory behind it (in one of my stories, my MC is being tutored in Transfiguration and have no idea how to explain the theory).

Great chapter, and I can't wait for the next one!

~Sara (House Cup 2014 Review)

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