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1 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Karou_Marauder Skyscraper

15th March 2014:
Hiya!

This is such a great story. You've described Ginny's feelings really well, and worked with the song extremely effectively (I sound like an English teacher :P). I love the fact that you skip between moments using the lyrics to change settings/time, that's clever and very clear. No typos or anything that I could spot. I love this story! I can really feel Ginny's emotions and I'm siding with her every step of the way. Amazing. 10/10.

-Karou

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing!!

I'm glad you liked it, because I wasn't entirely sure if splitting it up with the lyrics worked, so it's great to get feedback about that!

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