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Review #1, by megthechef43 Lost Memories

6th March 2014:
Caleidoscoop,

This was a great first chapter. You have me wondering what is going to happen next. I'm intrigued by your characters and you did a great job of naturally adding the descrptions of each of your characters in to the story so we could get a small feel of what each one looked like. I'm interested in Aeryn and Kayla's relationship and how Kayla endded up with her Sister's friend as a guardian. I'm also curious as to what happened to Kayla's sister and who the three people she was talking about are. Is it Kayla's mom, father, and sister? I guess I will just have to read on to know more.

This was a great first chapter and I will be reading more to figure out what is going on with Kayla and Aeryn. I can't wait to read more into the characters you have created. I'm glad you threw in the line about the Marauders as it gives a feel to the timeline of this story and where is falls within the Harry Potter series.

Great Job!

Meg

Author's Response: Thank you Meg for your review!

I hope the other chapters will be worth your time as well.
Let me know if they aren't :)


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