Reading Reviews for The Keeper's Daughter
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Review #1, by ohnobeans Everything but Fly

23rd January 2015:
gahh I forgot how much I loved this chapter! Gee and Leo are darn sweet together.

eep it's like reliving Gee noticing things about Albus! it's fun reading chapters twice! she likes his cheeks when he laughs I can't even deal


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Review #2, by ruby_slippers Everything but Fly

15th January 2015:
I just love your stories! So excited to see where this one is going to go. I love that you don't ever play on stereotypes and that you develop your characters and plots. Yay for Halloween this promises to be great!!

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Review #3, by ABookishBeing Everything but Fly

7th January 2015:
I'm squeeing at sick Gee.
Halloween is a favorite in ALL of your stories, I am definitely looking forward to what's coming up.AND THE NURSE GETUP but wait I bet Albus will sew it and make it less revealing BUT I WANT PEOPLE GAWKING AT GEE'S LEGS. I am really excited for a drunk Wood-Perry, this shalt be eventful. And can Matteo start being slightly horrid so that I can hate him in peace? Please? ALSO LEO YAY for HIM AND TWO-FIRST-NAMES and YES un-closeted wizards! This is fantastic, I love you and this story.

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Review #4, by Troll Master Everything but Fly

6th January 2015:
I don't wish to sound homophobic and I really like your stories as your writing is top notch but I don't think I'll be reading anymore of this story. The last thing I need is reading about two men trying to "hook up" in a Harry Potter fan fiction. I'm sure others will love it but it's not my cup of tea. Please keep writing though, you're a great writer!

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Review #5, by kobegeee Making Friends

10th December 2014:
So I sorta just power read through this and wanted to tell you how awesome your work is. I love the way you can develop your characters, and have great humour,and maintain a plot that makes me keep reading past 1am on school nights! Also let it be known that I personally ship Algee, and think Matteo is kind of a douche. Don't believe I ever actually reviewed breaking the quidditch code but that and its sequel are also wonderful and I loved reading both of those! Keep writing and I'll keep reading! -Kobe from Canada

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Review #6, by Sunshine&Daisies Making Friends

5th December 2014:
I love this story, I'm so glad you ended up doing a sequel to the original. Looking forward towards how things between Georgiana and Albus develop. Please update soon!!

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Review #7, by Jasmine_d_Princess Making Friends

3rd December 2014:
I recently went through Keep Away and Hide and Seek again. That reminded me why I absolutely love your characters.
As for the costume emergency, I think a former nurse costume is going to make a comeback. Am I right or am I right? :D

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Review #8, by ohnobeans Making Friends

30th November 2014:
I can't decide if Gee reminds me more of Oliver or Jane. It's really hard. might have to reread the story to see who she resembles.

I hate Matteo. grr. as another reviewer said Twatteo. he's the pits.

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Review #9, by ASDFGHJKL1234 Making Friends

30th November 2014:

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Review #10, by ABookishBeing Making Friends

30th November 2014:
PLEASE JUST BREAK UP GEE AND MATTEO. Though I hate him less for not being a royal booger and taking responsibility. Albus and Leo will be the most entertaining duo or lack thereof in all of literature and I am so excited. I'm missing the beast, Aurelia. Miles is quite attractive from the chapter image. Erm. What actually happened with Soph last chapter? That ought to come up soon, yeah? And Isla is like the Snow White of this fic.

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Review #11, by Rosevina Dance Class

19th November 2014:
Gee and Albus is just adorbs! Can't wait for more of them in the next chaps!!

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Review #12, by ohnobeans Dance Class

13th November 2014:

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Review #13, by ruby_slippers Dance Class

10th November 2014:
Well that was freaking adorable - look out Twatteo

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Review #14, by Bertle Dance Class

8th November 2014:
Okay, so it's been so long since I've reviewed that I doubt you'll even remember my pen name, but we're Facebook friends if that triggers anything! I know we've talked about this a couple of times, but again I wanted to apologize for dropping off the Earth for so long. Long story short, some changes in my life happened and in the mess of it all I stopped going on hpff for about a year. By the time I started reading again, you had about 3 new stories plus all the old ones I had to catch up on! But now I am officially caught up. So here is the beginning of my reviewing again, and I hope you can accept the apology- the lack of reviewing was no reflection on you!

Now for the actual review part! So I am totally loving Albus. I'm torn about Gee taking him to the class, because I think that is not at all how you should deal with issues in a relationship, but Matteo is being such a jerk (and I dislike him so much) that I'm kind of enjoying it lol. And maybe the way Gee is handling the whole thing is really just a sign her and Matteo do not work as a couple. I'm glad she's stopped moping quite so much, though I can understand it. She's being asked to give up her dream, and she has to mourn it first.

Albus dancing and loving his family and helping his little sister is making me want to jump him.

Leo and Sophia should have sex.

Matteo is a jerk.

And those pretty sum up my feelings for this chapter :P. Look for my reviews on your other stories as well as you update them! Again, I am so very sorry for how long it's been since I've reviewed. I hope you didn't take it personally. You are such a kind person and an amazing author, and I love all your stories. Keep writing!

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Review #15, by ABookishBeing Dance Class

8th November 2014:
Leggy Gee!!! Oh god, I need Gee and Albus now. I need Fryan and Gealbus and it needs to happen now. Please.
I really like Gee, she's like Ryan and Jane and those two are my favorites and will be forever, I think. Legs. Gah.
Is dancing going to be their red wine? It should, it suits Albus. I need more Albus, he seems like a fascinating character. Oooh, or seeing Albus with James at a Hogsmeade trip and tgeres a WWW branch I'm Hogsmeade? Maybe? Or James and Fred have a pub in the village, but James and Albus interaction would be amazing. Also, Albus and Lily interaction. This story is going to be amazing, and I can't wait until Hormones and DDT are finished so this can be the only story you update and it'll be even more frequent than it already is, and ill know the ending of Hormones, and ah, my little heart will be happy.
Amazing. Chapter.

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Review #16, by dobbyismyhero22 Dance Class

8th November 2014:
I adore Gee and Al an unreasonable amount. They are so cute together it hurts. I love the way you write Gee and Matteo's relationship though because I just feel like it's really real, which, you know, sucks for Gee cause Matteo is annoying but I feel like there are definitely boyfriends out there just like him. I also really love Leo. He's awesome. This story in general is awesome. I love Hormones and DTTT too but I actually think this one is my favorite. And that's saying a lot considering I really love the other two.

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Review #17, by daylight Dance Class

8th November 2014:
"Gatsby across the water green". UGH, dying from the perfection of that sentence.

This chapter was so brilliant, I'm loving Gee more and more as she starts finding herself. And I'm super loving Albus in this! They are so great together it hurts. Fab chapter, update soon! :)

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Review #18, by AlexShah Dance Class

8th November 2014:
Awww, I love how supportive Albus. I'm disliking Matteo more and more now. Can't wait for the next update!

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Review #19, by ruby_slippers Fragile

28th October 2014:
Just wanted to send a note saying I probably love this as much as all your other stories I have read and can't wait to see where you take it.
Happy writing friend!

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Review #20, by ScarletRoses Fragile

9th October 2014:
Brilliant! Per usual of course. I feel almost bad for Gee when it comes to Matteo. I just have this sinking feeling that he is going to let all of this get to his head..


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Review #21, by Sunshine&Daisies Fragile

8th October 2014:
Great story, I loved your other one about Jane and Oliver and I'm glad you are writing a follow-up. The characters are wonderful.

Please update again soon!

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Review #22, by out_of_character The Plan

17th September 2014:
I have to say, I enjoy everyone in this story. Even the characters that are meant to not be so liked because they are very realistic. They all balance the story, with Leo's personality, Sophia being a hot-head, Isla's sweet nature, Matteo being the boyfriend with a bit of selfishness in his attitude, and of course, Albus. Need I say more?

I'd beg you with chocolates and roses (I'm so cheesy) to come out with a new chapter right away. But I know being an adult blows.

Can we just abolish responsibilities? I need Gee/Albus action to function.

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Review #23, by out_of_character Nerves

17th September 2014:
Wow, the bit about her and Matteo's awkward intimacy from June caught me off guard. I at first thought that she was a virgin and that was why she didn't like talking about it. Great twist!

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Review #24, by out_of_character Lunch Date

17th September 2014:
I ADORE who you picked for Albus in your image. Exquisite! I think he portrays your Albus flawlessly. And also, I really enjoy how you write him. He's different from what I've read before but in an extremely and refreshingly good way.

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Review #25, by out_of_character Honesty

17th September 2014:
I am not fond of Pippa. But in a good way because you wrote her in so ideally. I've met quite a few Pippa's back in my day in high school and college.

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