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Review #1, by FawkesFelicis Pain, Ideas, and Revelations

14th February 2014:
Very interesting! I like crazy Draco. I almost feel like this is Film Noir, I love your bitter humor as the narrator. My only suggestion is to pace it a little more. It feels kind of rushed, and it seems like you have a lot of good ideas that could be fleshed out more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I thought about cutting the last sentance to not give too much away but I've got plenty more to come in future chapters.

Thanks again, and I look forward to more thoughts on future chapters!


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Review #2, by FawkesFelicis Taken

14th February 2014:
Oh wow, off to a really good start! Interesting how you tie in this idea of being able to do wandless magic. We do see it a couple of times in the series, but I love to see fic that picks up on a small detail. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it would be a good idea to bring something I've been thinking about for a while!

Stay tuned for more!


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Review #3, by bookworm530 Taken

8th February 2014:
Interesting start...my guess is that was Bellatrix at the end? And I wonder when Draco will make his entrance? Update soon!

Author's Response: I don't want to spoil it for most people, but it's good speculation! I'm working on Chapter 2 now.

Thanks for the review!


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