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Review #1, by ScorpiusRose17 Most Loyal

18th October 2014:
This is a really interesting one-shot. I don't normally read or write many with Bellatrix in them so this was fun to read.

I liked how you kept her real. She really is that character that will play with her food before she eats it and she never disappoints. She is just one of those characters that is also predictable, but you were able to keep me guessing throughout.

I like how Yaxley isn't afraid to put his two cents into her. A lot of the characters run the other way when Bellatrix confronts them, even her own husband seems scared of her, but I like how you chose Yaxley. Even in the books he seemed to be more... eye rolling at her all the time.

This was a fun One-shot and I look forward to reading and reviewing more of your stories in the future!

Slthyerin Review! :)

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Review #2, by Courtney Dark Most Loyal

17th February 2014:
Hey there! Thank you so much for entering the Uncomfortable Challenge!

I'm sure Bellatrix Lestrange would be an extremely difficult character to write about, as basically all we know about her is that she's a horrible person who enjoys torture and went more than a little insane while locked up in Azkaban. I personally have a deep loathing for her as she killed Sirius - sob!

Anyway, I think you did a good job with her characterization! She certainly seemed creepy and there were certain moments throughout this chapter when her insanity definitely showed through! I also enjoyed the way you wrote the torture scene.

Nice job!


Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!! I've been checking for your review constantly I couldn't wait to see what you thought of it.

It really was a challenge, I always wanted to write about her but couldnt seem to get it right, so I loved this challenge, I had to really do research, which didn't come up with much and wrote this several different times.

Sorry bout the long babbaling lol, again thank you so much.

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