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Review #1, by Courtney Dark Most Loyal

17th February 2014:
Hey there! Thank you so much for entering the Uncomfortable Challenge!

I'm sure Bellatrix Lestrange would be an extremely difficult character to write about, as basically all we know about her is that she's a horrible person who enjoys torture and went more than a little insane while locked up in Azkaban. I personally have a deep loathing for her as she killed Sirius - sob!

Anyway, I think you did a good job with her characterization! She certainly seemed creepy and there were certain moments throughout this chapter when her insanity definitely showed through! I also enjoyed the way you wrote the torture scene.

Nice job!

Courtney:)

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!! I've been checking for your review constantly I couldn't wait to see what you thought of it.

It really was a challenge, I always wanted to write about her but couldnt seem to get it right, so I loved this challenge, I had to really do research, which didn't come up with much and wrote this several different times.

Sorry bout the long babbaling lol, again thank you so much.


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