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Review #1, by SiriusAura92 Minerva McGonagall

6th March 2014:
Hey,
It's not a bad chapter but I feel as though you could've gone a lot further with it such as actually following her through the battle rather than ending it before.

Also, the spacing of the paragraphs kind of makes it look a bit messy.

But, like I said, it's not bad. It follows the book nicely and you've got a nice focus on Minerva's thoughts/feelings it just could've done with a bit more fleshing out.

Hope this helps
SiriusAura92

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Review #2, by MEW Minerva McGonagall

3rd February 2014:
LIKE! very interesting subject, I'll be reading the other chapters when they come out. Good luck!

Author's Response: Aww thank you =) The next chapter should be out by the end of the week. Thanks for the review =)
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