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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Severly forevery Midyear Breakups

2nd February 2014:
I can't believe it just when lily and Severus were a thing it all ends! At least we agree that there is nothing like Ben and Jerry's for a Brocken heart. Please get them back together forever!

Author's Response: I'll try, but who knows what will happen :P

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Review #2, by Xoxo Summer Endings

27th January 2014:
Pretty good effort for a first story, it's good to keep in the same tense but otherwise keep up the practise I'm sure u'll improve to become a great writer in time

Author's Response: Thank-you, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and thank-you for the advice, I'll try and remember that in future chapters :)

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Review #3, by Tommy Hilly Dancing and Romancing

26th January 2014:
Oh ma gawd, can someone spell LOVE THIS! Lily and Snape - so cute. Heart this story babe - keep writing and I'll keep reading

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I really hope you enjoy what's come

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Review #4, by Klara Sampson Summer Endings

23rd January 2014:
The relationship between snap and lily is really cute however needs to be further developed, which hopefully shall occur in the next few chapters?
Good beginning, interested to see where u'll go from here

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, continue reading and hopefully you'll be pleased

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