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Review #1, by PolyJuice_ The Flame

14th March 2014:
Blackout Battle for the HPFF Forums~
Review 5/10 (Heck yeah, halfway there!)

Aw, this was very cute! It did, however make me wanna go eat my weight in chocolate. This whole challenge for the HPFF Forums just has made me review such sad stories and I'm not sure I can take much more without becoming a puddle of feels. Your story is no exception.

I love how, from the start, Cho is thinking of Cedric. The little bits of insight into their relationship was just so adorable. You really made me believe that she had loved him. Which makes this whole situation so much worse. Poor girl. Heading straight from her boyfriend's death into a massive Wizarding War. *pats Cho on the head*

Anyway, this was great writing of yours, on top of a fantastic plot. Well done!


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