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Review #1, by MrsJaydeMalfoy Do You Believe?

20th July 2015:
Hufflepuff, House Cup 2015!

Awww! This is so sad, but also sweet at the same time. I have so many questions - who are these OCs? Are they related to anyone we know? And then, what happened to poor Daniel? He died so young!

I really feel sorry for Abby, with everyone expecting her to be happy, and not understanding that she needs to grieve - even if it has been a while since his death. But I'm so happy that she wasn't alone, and that James and the Priest were there to keep her company.

I thought the conversation with the priest was very realistic, as was his interpretation of Daniel's ghosts' actions. And, it really seemed like destiny or fate stepping in and leading James to that church on that particular night! I'd really like to read a sequel, or even a prequel to this, that gives some more details about what happened before and after!

Great job!

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Review #2, by alexaemd123 Do You Believe?

30th December 2014:
I really liked how you made her boyfriend that passed away make it sound as if he wanted Abby to move on and find love with someone. And obviously that someone is James! :) I also love how James was at the church because of some kind of feeling he had. I love how you make it sound like it was destiny for Abby and James to find each other. I loved it! Nice story line! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

And I'm so glad you picked up on that, I was trying to put that across in writing without physically saying it and making it obvious :D

Thanks again, this was such a sweet review!

~Aimee xxx


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Review #3, by Chaz Corner Do You Believe?

8th May 2014:
How can you write so well?

Author's Response: Thank you!!! I don't know whether that's necessarily true but thank you!
~Aimee xxx


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Review #4, by luvinpadfoot Do You Believe?

23rd April 2014:
Aw this was really bittersweet! You captured Abby's emotions perfectly. Even the scene with the priest felt realistic. I could imagine her going in just for lack of reason not to and finding more answers than she expected. The questions she asked were perfect. I think you definitely portrayed her confusion and sadness well.

I really enjoyed the ending with James! It was so hopeful without pushing her immediately into another relationship. I think after what she'd gone through that was a lovely way to end things. Hopeful, but not immediately happy yet.

Your writing is really strong. I'd love to be helpful and offer some critiques, but I really don't have any. I just adored reading this story and I'm so glad I found it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a lovely review! The whole priest seen was written first, believe it or not. I just based the rest of the story around that scene because I really liked the whole feel of it (if that made any sense?) And I loved the ending with James too! And I tried to not make it seem too forced into a too happy ending because of everything that she has been through :D Thank you so much again, I'm really happy that you enjoyed my story!!
~Aimee xxx


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Review #5, by Dangos Do You Believe?

26th January 2014:
I liked that a lot! It was really sweet and well written. Good job. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I was so nervous about putting it up! :D

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