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Review #1, by kenpo Street Lamps

15th April 2014:
OHMYGOSH THIS WAS SO SWEET!

Okay. Deep breath. Okay. Okay. I'm good.

I really like George/Angelina. A lot of people don't, because of the Fred/Angelina thing... but I really like them. I love the way you wrote them. This is really different than my headcanon, but I still loved it.

I love romances like this. The easy ones. I love reading about people who just fall into a life together with love triangles or infidelity or betrayal. You've given them such a sweet, innocent love, and I think it fits them well.

I think my favorite part was all the mentions of the rest of the family. And tied with that, was when George told her to work with him.

And the chair!

Okay. I guess the whole thing was my favorite. This was really really well done.

-Georgia
-Huffleclaw Ravenpuff Eggstravaganza-

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Review #2, by DracosGirl012 Street Lamps

27th February 2014:
George and Angelina, am I right? This was wonderful by the way! Loved it. :)

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Review #3, by keyty Street Lamps

1st February 2014:
Oh my gosh I am tearing up. This is so beautiful. I assumed it was George and ahh I just love this. The 2nd person works perfectly, it makes the emotion more real and I can really feel what he feels. The mention of her makes me happy too. You had a couple of issues remaining in the same tense, but it wasn't very major.
I really love this story, it's so sweet. Your writing is very strong, I'm so glad you asked me to review this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to leave this for me :)
Yes, tenses are my absolute worst weakness :(

I'm so glad you liked it!
~Shiloh


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Review #4, by teh tarik Street Lamps

21st January 2014:
Hello Shiloh! You left me such lovely reviews for my story that I thought I'd stop by your AP and see what you've written!

And wow! This story is amazing! George/Angelina is one of my favourite canon ships, but fics exploring this pairing are quite hard to come by, so yours was an absolute treat to read. The writing is simple but so earnest and beautiful, and I do think your use of second person worked really well here. You really got into George's frame of mind; you captured his initial solitude and loneliness without too much drama or angst, and then you portrayed his budding relationship with Angelina beautifully!

Speaking of Angelina, gahh! I love what you've done with her here. I love her entrance, how she walks into the shop and declares that George will take her out to dinner, her hip leaning against the table (such a lovely detail!). It's a very wonderful relationship portrayal, and I love the imagery of the streetlamps, and how special these are to both George and Angelina.

And awww, that ending! ♥ That was so fluffy, and you ended the fic on the perfect note, reinforcing the streetlamp metaphor, and with George about to propose to Angelina...at least I think that's what he was about to do with the ring box.

I really loved this story; your writing is delicate and your characters are vulnerable but strong at the same time, and just beautifully written. Great work!

-teh

Author's Response: OH MY GOSH ♥
What a magnificent review! Thank you :)

I am sooo glad you like it. I have never written George and Angelina before so I was a bit unsure going into it but now I just adore them. I've never written Angelina much at all and she came to me much easier than I expected.

I actually started writing this in first person and it just wasn't working, so I went back and changed it and BAM! it sounded so much better.

Thank you for this *hug* You're the best.
xoxo
Shiloh


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