183 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ali It's His Mark

21st November 2016:
Hello! I absolutely love your story, I honestly could not stop reading it!! Just curious but are you going to finish writing the story and then re-edit all of the chapters or are you going to edit first and then finish it? I can't wait to find out what happens!!

Author's Response: Hi there!

Aww thats so sweet, thank you!! My plan is to edit and rewrite all of the content that is already up before I post the last few chapters of the story. Just because some things are probably going to change, so it wouldn't make sense if I put the ending of the story up now. I'm hoping to have the whole thing edited and finished at least by like February at the latest. *crosses fingers* But it's definitely something I'm going to finish. I've put way too much work into this to abandon it. :)

Thank you so, so much for reading and for reviewing!! ♥

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Review #2, by motherconfessor Welcome to Hogwarts

9th November 2016:
eee! I saw you updated it on here. I'm so excited, this is absolutely incredible!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it! I'm currently working on the next few chapters now, so I'm hoping to have them up soon. :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ♥

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Review #3, by samantha It's His Mark

1st October 2016:
please keep righting its a good book and i love to see you continue it with all the changes hermione caused

Author's Response: Hiya!

I'm working on the rewrite of this, so this story is one of my main priorities at the moment. If you haven't seen yet, chapters 1-5 are all a new (rewritten) version of chapter 1, and I'm working on the next few chapters now. After all the current chapters are edited, changed and rewritten, I'll post the final few chapters of the story. :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! ♥

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Review #4, by Erica It's His Mark

28th July 2016:
I just happened upon your story and love it!! I sincerely hope to see an update soon. I'd like to take the time soon to review each chapter. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!! I'm actually in the process of re-writing this, so the version here is the old one. I have the updated version posted on 2 other archives. I'm going to start posting the updated chapters here soon though. I just have to finish the chapter I'm working on right now, and I can get the first 3 up on here. But if you happen to stumble upon this story elsewhere, you'll be finding the new version. :)

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Review #5, by NotDobby It's His Mark

28th May 2016:
Hi great story sorry about not reviewing before now but I just needed to know what was going to happen haha please continue it wasnt until just now I realised that there is not a next chapter just yet and got a few worried looks off people on the bus when I said what outraged loudly haha it is a great great story I love it. Keep going

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Review #6, by Jen It's His Mark

30th January 2016:
Wonderful story! I really hope it's not abandon 💔

Author's Response: Hi there!!

Aww thank you!! ♥ No it's not abandoned (even though it's been far too long since I've updated). I'm working on rewriting a lot of this and then when that's done I'll finish it up. I have a few other projects I'm finishing up first, and then it's back to this. So it's definitely not going to be abandoned by any means. :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm super excited that you're enjoying it! I hope you enjoy the end of the story!!

xoxo Meg

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Review #7, by tmcar1 It's His Mark

14th September 2015:
Oh my god this is SO GOOD! Please write more!!!

Author's Response: Gah! Thank you!! *hug* I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying it! I should be getting back to this soon-ish. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!! ♥

Thank you for reading and the lovely review!!

xoxo Meg

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Review #8, by MrHappyDreaming It's His Mark

28th July 2015:
What an amazing story. I really love it. I love your writing and I think the story is very nice as well.
I really enjoy it and would love to know what happens next.
Do you plan on finishing the story? Because I noticed that the last chapter was some time ago :c i sincerely hope you will finish it :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! I really am sorry about not updating in forever. I'm definitely planning on finishing this. Real life and other projects kind of got in the way, but I'm going to be tweaking/rewriting what's up already, and then I'm going to finish this. It won't be abandoned ever, promise!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! So sorry it's taken me ages to respond!

xoxo Meg

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Review #9, by GeekAttack It's His Mark

14th June 2015:
I'm loving how this story is progressing! Your intricate web of secrets is really intriguing. I be loving my Hermione time turner fics! Awesome work. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Hi there!

Oh wow thank you so much!! I must admit, I was having quite a bit of writer's block with this story for a while now. But I'm pleased to say that I actually got back to writing this a few days ago. I have nearly half of the following chapter written and am hoping to have it finished and up within the next few weeks! :D

Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! I truly appreciate the kind words and I hope you continue to enjoy the story! ♥

xoxo Meg

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Review #10, by toomanycurls I would if I could, but I can't.

9th June 2015:
Hello dahling!

I've had your chapter open all day but I was distracted by this and that and I'm just now finally leaving you a review.

Good job Hermion on turning in her v-card. It's sad that she can't help but think about having to leave Sirius one day but the cynic in me knows most first relationships aren't really meant to last forever so... yeah.

Oh boy, meeting a young Vernon had to be *fun* - like Argus Filch levels of fun. I do like Hermione's gift with their patronuses on a necklace but Hermione's ability to accidentially hint that she's from the future is kind of hilarious. Wait, does "made it happen" mean have sex? I'm using that from now. Oh boy, I think this is cynic Rose reviewing tonight - I just want to shake Hermione and Lily for going on about meeting the one.

Hermione totally ships James/Sirius.

When Hermione thinks the Potters know how to have a good time, I interpretted that as she thinks they're lush. Mainly because I use that as a coded way to call people drunks (or excessive partiers). But I'm a judger.

haha, they thought it would be a good idea to send the lovebirds off together for hide and go make out? I'm really intrigued by their conversation and Sirius' instant realization that one of his friends (or he) got James and Lily killed. I wonder if he is suspcious of Remus because he used his surname when he realized it would have to be "Lupin or Peter." It's really unfair of him to expect her to just tell him that - especially when they're all shut in together.

Or, wait, I just noticed your'e calling Remus by his last name in this section of the chapter. Are you going for variety or something else?

It's fascinating that Dorea and Charlus know about them being animagi and are cool iwth it. I can't think of an exact non-magic equivilant but they're very, very lax about any sort of rules.

I really like the talk between Lily and Hermione - saying she's been all wrapped up in Sirius. People can go a bit overboard with new relationships (and probably more so because they know there's a time limit on their relationship).

I think an eyeroll and "boys" sums up their reappearance from outside. It is hilarious that James wanted Lily to ride on his back (and that she complied).

okay okay okay - I know I'm skipping over a bit to jump to this but WHAT IS THAT?! HOW DID HE GUESS? JUST A 50/50 THING?! anyway, great chapter!

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Review #11, by Sarah It's His Mark

7th June 2015:
It's been 6 months since the last chapter was published.
Please publish the next one soon. I love the story and just
want closure on the story and right now I defiantly do not have
closure. I just love all the characters so much I hope you don't
kill off any of them.do you? Lots of love for you and the story.
Please write more asap.

Author's Response: Hi Sarah! :)

I know, I'm so sorry! Sadly I had a bit of writer's block with this story. I just couldn't seem to get the words out, even though I do know how I want the story to proceed and end.

As for any character deaths, I don't want to say anything and spoil the ending on you! :p But just keep in mind that this is war, so you never know...

I actually just got back to writing this the other day and have nearly half of the following chapter written out. So I'm *hoping* that I have it posted within a few weeks or so.

I'm so super thrilled that you're enjoying this story and I promise - regardless of how long it might take *hides* - I am definitely going to finish this story. There's only a few more chapters left at this point. :)

Thank you for reading and taking the time to review! I truly appreciate it and again as sorry about the delay! ♥

xoxo Meg

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Review #12, by sleepingdragons It's His Mark

8th May 2015:
Ahh I can't believe I haven't left a review in so long!!
First off, this chapter was just so emotional. I can sense that a lot of emotions are coming out now especially since Hermione can tell her time in the past and with the current Sirius might soon be over :(

Snape - omg! He has the dark mark?! That's pretty serious and would be scary for him, but I can see how it would be beneficial to the Order. And I'm so happy he's seeing it's time to do the right thing. Hopefully this means sometime soon he and Lily could rebuild their friendship somehow?! I'm also just hoping Sirius won't completely lose it when he finds out about Hermione sneaking off to see Snape.

Poor Hermione - and Lily. With the situations they're in it's no wonder they're so sad at the moment - and poor James and Sirius don't completely know why either. I can imagine why Hermione broke down like she did; the task she has must be so stressful and totally emotionally draining.

Please please please x1000 update soon!! I actually can't wait to see how everything will turn out for Hermione, and for Hermione and Sirius.

This chapter was so amazing as always!
Niamh xx

Author's Response: Niamh!! Hi!! *hug*

That's totally fine!! ♥

Yeah, things are getting kind of heavy now. It's getting closer to the end. :(

He does! I know, it's definitely not to be taken lightly. But like you said, he is doing the right thing and maybe he and Lily could rebuild their friendship...? Maaaybe...

Hahaha, We'll see how Sirius reacts if he finds out. :D

Oh that was all really emotionally draining for them (and for me to write!). They had all just been holding in so much up to that point. They wouldn't be human if it didn't all get to them just a bit.

I actually have most of the next chapter written out, for a while now. I just have a horrible block with the ending of that chapter. I'm hoping to have it up soon though!

Aww thank you so much!! I'm super thrilled that you've enjoyed it all up to this point! And I do hope that you enjoy the rest (and ending) of this story! ♥

xoxo Meg

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Review #13, by Emma It's His Mark

2nd May 2015:
IT HAS BEEN SO LONG since the last chapter was updated, have you decided to leave the story where it is? Please don't do this to me I need more. Please write more. It is such a great storyline it has drawn me in and I am like an addict I just want more. Please write more soon!

Author's Response: Hi Emma!

I know *hides* I'm sorry! :( I haven't abandoned this story, I promise. But I have been working a few other things while I try to get my muse back with this story. I'm writing a Hermione/Snape right now that I think is kind of taking me out of Hermione/Sirius at the moment. But as soon as I'm finished with that, I plan to get back to this.

Thank you so much for reading and I'm super thrilled that you've been enjoying this so far. But no, I am definitely not ending this where it's at. I am going to finish it, hopefully within the next few months.

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review! I'm sorry again for the wait on the end of this story!

xoxo Meg

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Review #14, by toomanycurls Secrets, secrets are no fun. Secrets, secrets hurt someone.

22nd April 2015:

I don't think I've mentioned before but your details are really great. I love how well visualized each location and person is. I've never been able to write with that kind of precision and I'm a bit jealous of your eye for detail.

Onto some drama - I cannot believe that Dorea just read Hermione like that. I mean, I can and it's not too much of a surprise that Harry's grandma is a powerful witch but wow. It does make sense given her love and feelings of protection over Sirius that she would suss out anyone who seemed off.

Next bit of drama - I was worried that Sirius would completely fly off the edge with overhearing Hermione's true past. I'm glad that he was reasonable enough to listen to Hermione because I would have been very angry if they broke up unnecessarily (because they wouldn't sit down and talk). I was also worried that Hermione wouldn't open up and cause another reason for them to part ways on bad terms. Sirius took the news of everything pretty well. It's interesting that she didn't reveal Peter's betrayal but she still said not to use his as Secret Keeper. I feel like Sirius will see through that.

I love that they had sexy time and cracked up at James' reaction.

Dorea's apology seemed out of place. I mean, she didn't do that by accident so why not stand by her decision?

Hermione's gift to Sirius is really sweet. In the end, I'll be very interested to see if Sirius lives and how his love life turns out. I haven't looked to see if this is complete but if it's not you better keep working on it.

Thanks for the swap!

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Review #15, by GingeredTea Unrelenting

14th April 2015:
Hi! Here for the review swap! Apparently I've already reviewed the first chapter of this story. :) I did a quick re-read to get myself up to speed, though. Here goes!

I enjoyed seeing the Marauders and their interactions with Lily and Hermione. It is sort of hard to dually know the seriousness of her task while reading the light-fluffiness of her environment (at the moment).

I admit I was a little thrown at how easily Hermione began to have those sorts of feelings for Sirius - it didn't seem very like her.

The Potions class was...interesting...

"What is his problem!? I have made it abundantly clear, all day, that I am not interested. Why wonít he give it a rest? "

Pretty sure she's actually done the exact opposite...

This was an interesting chapter. I'm really interested in what will happen once she contacts Dumbledore.

Thanks for the swap!

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Review #16, by toomanycurls Peter Pettigrew's Potential Problem

9th April 2015:

I love that Hermione schemed to get all of them at the Christmas party together. She had the same idea for her and Harry going together so I'm not surprised she thought of that with this group. It's always nice to have the thoughtful, inclusive friend.

Wow, Lily's dress is quite the JLO style item. Both Lily and Hermione donned quite provacative dresses for the party. I think the guys should have worn revealing dress robes. Hey, equality is equality. :P

haha, I love that James and Sirius went arm in arm together. Their personalities make me laugh so much.

I like your commentary on Sluggy here - I mean, it's an awful way to treat people (like the either matter or don't). I'm not sure if the treatment is worse for Peter or Remus - neither are swimming in conidence.

Oh wow, it's surreal to see Snape bully Peter into betraying his friends. I am curious what made Snape seek out Peter (and I have to comment/ask how Snape didn't suspect Peter over Sirius if he knows Peter goes on to spy for Voldemort). I'm not sure it would be quite the same dishonor for Hermione to approach them with facts about Peter talking to Snape about joining the death eaters.

Aw, it sounds like Sirius is a bit worried about losing Hermione. Her behavior must seem quite erratic towards him.

Poor Remus - it's not fair that his friends outted his condition (though Hermione already knows). Lily is so sweet to Remus and his reaction got me all emotional too. haha, Hermione is quite the actress here. Being upset that Sirius didn't tell her something she knew but he didn't know she knew. :P that's great. I do hope Peter also feels like they're his brothers. *sigh*

Great chapter!

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Review #17, by awesomepotter - Round 4 This is your mission, if you should choose to accept it.

7th April 2015:
Don't worry about this being at all cliche or anything, I love time travel stories as well! I thought this was a great start to one, as well - in my opinion you got all of the characterisation spot on. I know that sometimes people like Dumbledore can be difficult to write (having attempted to do so myself) but I think you have a lovely take on him here. His tone and mannerisms were very fitting of his character. It's a little funny to see Hermione refer to everyone lese by their given names, but refer to Remus as 'Lupin', but I guess it would probably be out of force of habit for her, having been taught by him for a year, so it is completely understandable for her character. All of your description of people, their mannerisms, and locations is also great. It's clear enough that it gives us a nice picture of the scene, without overshadowing the dialogue and action, which creates a lovely flow to this chapter. I also like how Hermione seems to already be having an effect on Sirius - how he already thinks that he maybe doesn't want to treat her in his normal fashion - it might be the romantic in me, but I thought that was very sweet to read and I thoroughly enjoyed that part.
I think you've done a great job of setting up the plot for the rest of the story, too - telling the protagonist their end goal, but giving them no real clues as to how to get there. So far, I think it's been a very good start to a novel, and if you have written the flag this round, I look forward to reviewing more of it! Well done - I love it!

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Review #18, by toomanycurls No more fooling around.

27th March 2015:

I felt like quite a bit happened in this chapter. Seeing Hermione and Sirius flirt was very sweet and not at all out of character. I mean, it's natural for their physical relationship (and flirtation) to progress. I imagine Hermione thinks it is unlike her because this is her first relationship that has lasted this long.

It does seem that the last month has allowed Hermione to not face the stress of her assignment or grieve from the battle. Everyone's panic about her passing out really shows their attachment to her. Sirius' concern is especially sweet. It's also nice that they didn't dig deep on the reason for Hermione's stress-isode. I wish we could see a bit more about what made Hermione stand out from the other women Sirius dated before.

The meeting with Dumbledore was so dramatic (emotionally). It's very sad that Hermione will have to chose between her two futures. Fetching the diadem was quite eventful though Snape's attack was out of hte blue. I'll be interested to see if this has impacts down the road. Anyway, Dumbledore's plan to tackle the horcruxes sounds rather solid. I am curious though if the one in the cave is there yet. I mean, I got the feeling that he was placing it when he and Kreacher went to go to the cave together.

I think Hermione's plan to befriend Peter will help out. I'm not surprised that it didn't take much to make Peter feel more included and valued. Christmas should be exciting!! I'm excited for it.


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Review #19, by toomanycurls Hogsmeade

25th March 2015:
Oh boy. This chapter was quite the will they/won't they. I liked that Sirius laid off other girls and he and Hermione were able to be friends. I do like that Hermione had plenty of time to sort out her thoughts and feelings. It would be nice to have seen an expanded view of Hermione and Sirius as friends to get a good feeling what Lily saw when she thought they were perfect together. Hermeione's comparison between Lily and Ginny was quite interesting - I'm part glad and sad that Hermione prefers Lily's company.

I wonder if Sirius' "worth the wait" comment is a bit prophetic. Just a thought.

I got a bit choked up when they toasted to Hermione. It's very sweet. Then I was kind of laughing at Hermione telling them all about her first year adventures. I mean, she doesn't strike me as the bragging type but I enjoyed the effect it had on the group.

Dude. James and the walking in. I'm glad Harry grew up with a bit more sense than his father. At first I thought they were going to have another "let's just be friends/I'll lay off" talk and I was going to shake someone. I'm glad they moved forward even though it is scary for Hermione.

I'm interested to see how you throw a wrench in this now.


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Review #20, by toomanycurls These Foolish Games

21st March 2015:

I'm a bit surprised Hermione and Sirius are both so heart broken the next day. They're acting like they made out and regretted it or something. I do think Hermione deserved to give him distance afterwards, he was being forward and very pushy. I am glad she opened up a bit to Lily about her apprehension to date Sirius.

Lily saying yes to James was adorable. I wonder if Hermione and Sirius' relationship-thing put a mirror in front of her regarding her attitude towards James. Sirius' reaction made me laugh the most. Oh dear, Hermione was hit hard by the feels there. :(

Remus giving relationship advice... I'm judging him based mainly on my own headcanon for him but still. He's always so wise with his words but horrible iwth execution of his own advice.

I'm mostly not surprised Sirius tried to make Hermione jealous. The dramatic teenager in me would have loved to see that relationship go on a bit for some good and painful angst. I'm a bit hopeful about this promise for them to just be friends.

It'll be interesting to see how Hermione's information sharing unfolds in the future. I wonder if he'll act on the information or decide it is too risky. I do love Dumbledore's advice - very like him to encourage relationships and romance. :D

Thanks for swapping!


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Review #21, by toomanycurls The Inevitable Breakdown

14th March 2015:
Hi Meg!

ooh, I forgot to talk about Hermione's plan to write to Dumbledore in my last review. I love that she's doing that but I'm not sure Dumbledore will let Hermione share information about the future. I kind of laughed at Hermione for thinking she was pressing Sirius too much for information when he had been so forward and intrusive (perhaps not about private information but definitely pushed her boundaries). No, wait, I wanted to hear what was wrong. well... okay. maybe it'll come out later. I feel as if his episode of him asking Hermione out is the most genuine feeling interaction between them you'e had (where Sirius doesn't just seem like some sort of over-hyped boy). that is, until she said yes. I'm kind of chagrined that he changed the terms and she's going with it. I mean, I ship them, but he's being a turd. Well, at least it kind of wears on Hermione too. I feel validated.

Aw. :( :( :( :( Hermione's "i don't belong here" just got me so sad. I mean, Lily did raise some good points with Hermione's stated feelings versus behavior and I was a bit surprised that she didn't mention Ron (I suppose things are complicated between them at the point she left). Oh dear. I just want to hug Hermione. I can't blame her for being overwhelmed by this and the future and the weight of it all. I guess if anything good comes from her outburst it is that Sirius said he'll calm down a bit.

but then, he's still a bit pushy trying to get Hermione to say how she feels about him. He's qutie insecure. Hermione blowing up at Sirius felt kind of cathartic for me. This does have to be difficult for sirius as he's getting completely mixed signals from Hermione. Ooh, Lily as matchmaker should be fun!


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Review #22, by toomanycurls Unrelenting

14th March 2015:
Hi Meg!

o.O how can you start me off with such feels? I'm part amused and part stung that Hermione saw Lily's eyes and thought of Harry, especially so early in the morning. I got a laugh at Hermione's explanation of her friendship with Harry - way to sink Harmione :P (I don't ship them bu i don't not ship them)

Throughout the chapter I'm quite amazed at how strong Sirius comes on. I'd be quite cross with him with that behavior but I really don't like unwanted attention. It makes me go a bit hy-cha at people. I almost groaned at the idea of James and Sirius pairing up to win over Lily and Hermione. Remus and Hermione's observation that Lily loves James is a bit of a surprise. I mean, she's not letting on much. I do like that Remus is tryiing to soften Hermione up for Sirius. Part of me sees him as a good wingman in this scene and part of me thinks he's being genuine. Sirius and James seem to have a really bad idea on how to attrack girls. I think I might be showing my age with this but they just seem a bit annoying rather than charming.

Wow. Snape. I don't know if I have words for that. I loved how the Marauders stood united against Snape - it was such an awesome show of solidarity. I'm not surprised Slughorn didn't immediately try to punish Snape.

I kind of have to give Hermione the side eye at her assertion of not leading Sirius on - she's not been completely stone cold towards him (though, I do give people lessons on this). She did let him walk her to lunch (arm in arm) and was rather flirty wtih him at times. Oh well, she's struggling with her own feelings.

Hermione and lily's relationship is quite sweet. I laughed at Hermione calling her Lily Potter and Lily taking it as a bit of teasing. I'm so excited and moving onto the next chapter!!


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Review #23, by toomanycurls This is your mission, if you should choose to accept it.

31st January 2015:
Hello, hello!!

I'm all out of chapters on your other story so I came by here instead. I really like time travel stories - there are a lot of them (or were at one point) but they are fun to read each time. I admire that you're able to have two very different time travel stories in the air and that you're able to maintain their uniqueness. All of my stories go together in some sense because I can't keep those lines in my head where headcanon starts and ends for a certain story.

Dumbledore being alive in this is a nice change - I like how he talked her into the trip and gave Hermione a bit of time to work into the idea. He must have used some rather powerful magic to have the time turner transport Hermione to a different time and place! That's pretty exciting. It was also cool to see Hermione's ability to come up with a new idenity on the spot. I am curious though - he says to help save Lily and James soon so she's not back in time for too long. How will she return to the future? I did not think the time turners could travel forward.

It is nice that Hermione is found by James and Sirius right away. I like how different Hermione reacts to Sirius in this compared to your other story. She's quite taken with both him (and Remus) on first sight. Sirius and James do seem like a pair of goobers. Really endearing but kind of goofy too. Ha, poor Peter is a bit of a lump on the log. Good thing Hermione managed to meet him without killing him. :)

I wonder how many other weird incidents like Hermione going back in time Dumbldore had to deal with in his life. I mean, he doesn't really bat an eyelash at her showing up with a letter from future him. It makes me wonder, that's for sure.

I'm sure that I'm quite taken with Sirius right now. His description of other girls as bimbos kind of irks me but I'll wait to see how he pans out in future chapters.


Author's Response: Hey Rose! Finally answering this review after way, way, way too long. *hides*

I love time-travel and can hardly find any that are completed! :( (And now I'm adding to the endless WIP time-travel stories haha). Aww thank you! I really don't know how I keep them separate in my head, to be honest. It's probably why I haven't updated this one since September. *hides again* I love how your stories are all connected though. I wish I were able to do that.

Basically I imagined that Dumbledore tweaked this time-turner. Because; wishful thinking. Just for the purpose of this story, it was able to travel back years and then as for her getting back... Well. We'll see what happens there. Maybe he'll tweak it again? Maybe she won't go back? Maybe she won't even survive? We'll see. ;)

Hahaha yeah, she's not really a fan of Sirius in the other story. But in this one, she was kind of taken with him at first sight. Not love at first sight, but she definitely appreciated his charm and looks. Even though she tried to convince herself otherwise. I imagine James and Sirius being, and I LOVE the word you used, complete goobers. :D But relatively harmless. Just two teenaged boys who are popular, funny, charming and know it. *Sigh* oh Peter. I have lots of Peter feels.

Honestly though, I really feel like Dumbledore wouldn't even bat an eye sometimes. He just strikes me as the type that would be like, "Well. That just happened." XD

I don't really like the "bimbos" thing either. I'm sure he'll change. ;)

Gah, Rose! I'm sorry for how long it's taken me to respond! Thank you so much for reading and for your reviews. I'm hoping to knock them all out pretty soon!

Thank you again!! ♥ ♥

Much love and tons of hugs,

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Review #24, by marauderfan The Inevitable Breakdown

22nd January 2015:
Here for our swap! :)

I can't believe she actually said yes to him! Of course it was a trick though :-/ but I love how even though she's kind of giddy and has all these feelings, she's still primarily making decisions based on logic, as she agrees to walk with him to not give away her prior knowledge of where the Owlery is, etc.

Ahaha. Poor Peter, laughing so hard that milk came out his nose. That is the worst thing to have happen to you at a meal. I can relate ahaha

The breakdown seemed entirely realistic for Hermione. She's kept herself together so well in such an incredibly difficult situation where she's had all these surprises thrown at her. It really is impressive. So I can't blame her for freaking out. And her reasons for saying no to Sirius make sense too, it's not like she's just playing hard to get, but because she knows what happens to him and she's worried about what happens in the future. And - all this and she can't tell anyone! I'd be going crazy. Or else I'd be spilling secrets right and left and it'd be bad.

So I couldn't really blame her for letting Sirius down at the end - she does have valid reasons. But I can understand why Sirius would be so upset as she gave no reason even after that intense eye-staring thing they had. Ah! Time travel complications!

Awesome chapter, Meg!

Author's Response: Ah! I've taken ages to respond to this!! *hides face in shame*

Haha yeah, Sirius was definitely slick there, wasn't he? She's trying so hard, the poor thing. I'm not making life very easy on her at all. ;)

Isn't that the worst?! It stings so bad!

Same here! I would have completely lost it just like she did. I mean, that's a lot to have on your shoulders, and then add in the additional stress of Sirius wanting to date her. How could you not break down?

Time travel does have complications, but it's so much fun! :p

Aww thank you so much! I'm so sorry for how shamefully long it has taken me to respond!

xoxo Meg

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Review #25, by sleepingdragons The Calm Before The Storm

22nd January 2015:
Yay they won the match!
And aww the surprise party for Sirius was so sweet! Even if Hermione and Sirius did have a bit of a fight. And what an awesome present from James and Hermione!
I'm glad Hermione did decide to see Snape anyhow, but I'm kind of worried about how Sirius will react when he finds out?
And as for Lily, she's so sneaky with the cloak! That was so funny what she said about 'withholding something' haha.
Can't wait to read on and see what Severus has to say...
- Niamh

Author's Response: Hey Niamh!! :)

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond!

Yay for Gryffindor!! :D

It did! Finally something worked out well for them all haha. After all the bad luck they've been having, a Gryffie win and then the surprise party were just what they needed. Then reality smacked them in the face with the letters that came for Hermione.

Would we expect anything different from Hermione? ;) Lily was fantastic there, I'm glad you liked it!!

Thank you so, so, so much for stopping by to leave another review! I'm super thrilled that you've been enjoying this so far and I hope you continue to enjoy it!! ♥

Again, I'm sorry for how long I've taken to respond. I normally don't let my reviews sit unresponded to for this long.

xoxo Meg

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