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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Jayna The Hogwarts Express

26th March 2015:
Hi! First, I like how this is written from two PoV's. It's always interesting to see the two sides to the story. I also liked how you managed to weave in some of the events from the book. However, there are a few places where, in my opinion, Luna seems out of character. For example,

"Finally! Back to Hogwarts! I didn't use to like going back, but I have friends now - Harry, Ron, Hermione, Neville, Ginny... especially Ginny - and they all seem to think of me as a friend as well. "

I didn't think Luna ever didn't like school because she had few friends. To me she always seemed like she didn't care what people thought. Again, this is just my perspective.


Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I try to keep them in character, but I hadn't thought about the friend thing like that, so I'll try in future. Obviously with fanfictions it can be hard to keep the characters the same, especially with a pairing like this, but I like to try, and that should be helpful. Thanks!

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Review #2, by Bellatrixlestrange34(MSP) The Great Feast

23rd August 2014:
Awesome story so far ^-^

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm gonna try to have chapter 3 finished soon :)

P.S I'm reading your Mario fanfic XD

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