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Review #1, by Freda_and_Georgina A Much Better Name

11th July 2014:
Aaaand, let the happy tears flow. Seriously, although it was short, it was amazing. This is what I see as an accurate picture of Ron and Hermione's relationship. And Ron set it up really well, it was heartfelt without being too sappy. It seemed pretty short, but it was well-written in that short time. When you talked about Ginny, I thought for a moment you were going to say she pestered Ron about when Harry was going to propose, but I could see her asking Ron when he would propose to Hermione. Incredibly sweet, I loved it.
--Georgina
2014 House Cup Review

Author's Response: Aw!! Thanks so much, I really wanted it to be simple, and capture their relationship accurately. I knew that Ron wouldn't be that sappy, so I decided I would make it a bit shorter and more like him. Thank you again so much. xox
LG


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Review #2, by PolyJuice_ A Much Better Name

14th March 2014:
Blackout Battle for the HPFF Forums~
Review 6/10!

Oh my gosh! For such a short story you managed to capture a whole relationship's worth of cute! You managed to pretty much tell the tale of who Romione is. From Ron forgetting their anniversary (Oh Ron, you're an idiot) to Hermione's nervousness about him having not proposed yet this felt almost canoncial.

Ron's proposal speech was just totally adorable. He's just such a dork, isn't he? Anyway, in so few words you made me realise why Romione is so many people's OTP. It makes me wonder how JKR could say their relationship was her personal wish-fulfillment. Especially when writes like you come along and make me love them!

Ah well, what can you do? :P

Liz

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you darling!

I am so so glad you liked it. I was aiming for it to be short and simple, but still deep and really capture the entire essence of their relationship, y'know?

Ron's proposal speech was (obviously) inspired by a quote (one of my favs :P) and I knew that he wouldn't give some long sappy speech, so I had to make it sound just more like him. He's my favorite character, and Romione is so one of my favorite OTP's so I just had to write this and ahh.

xox
Jessica (LG)


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