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Review #1, by Fluffywuffywoopoo Half-Baked

8th April 2014:
Hurry up and post the next chapter! Face palm

Author's Response: in due time, my friend, in due time

(check out our blog in the meantime for updates !!! link is on our profile)

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Review #2, by BelievemeorLeaveme Half-Baked

7th April 2014:
Love this! I love the dynamic between Sirius and Carter. Update soon, pretty please!

Author's Response: thank you so much hopefully we'll be able to update quickly!

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Review #3, by blue_splash Azure Skies (And Jumpers Too!)

27th March 2014:
Another great chapter! Please update soon, I cant wait to read more! I'm curious to see what happens with the bathroom incident or if it was just random. Also we've yet to actually see Lily, does that mean the girls arent friends with her or just not close? Remus is sweet to Lia, I'm sensing some romance over there, well hopefully haha! Anyways I'm rambling. I love it and and cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: hey this is so nice thank you for your kind words!!! lily WILL be in the story we just wanted to take a different route from the usual lily/oc bff scenario you see so often in other fics. but we promise she's not completely left out!!

it would be pretty difficult to share a dorm with someone for your entire adolescent life and not become friends wouldn't it?? hahaha

as for everything else... you'll see in future chapters ;) should update soon!

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Review #4, by blue_splash Gossamer Season

27th March 2014:
Absolutley fantastic! Cant wait to read more! I love Lia and Carters friendship! Great work

Author's Response: thank you so much you are so lovely!! we're really trying to show how close carter and lia are so i'm glad it's coming off like we want it to

we should update soon so you won't have too long to wait to read more

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Review #5, by sweetypye0110 We Built Another World

5th February 2014:
Great start!!! Can't wait to see where you're going to go with this. Update soon please!

Author's Response: hey friend thank you so much!! the next chapter is actually currently in the queue, so i think you'll be thrilled to know that we will be updating soon. :)

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Review #6, by oldnumberseven  We Built Another World

15th January 2014:
Well, you certainly got my attention by opening the chapter with a quote - not only do I love doing that myself, but it's a beautiful Sartre one as well!

First, I have to commend you (and I'm using the collective you here, since it seems there is more than one writer for this fic?) for adding some spice to the typical train ride/sorting feast template most people use to start their fics. But man, you've got some interesting female OC characters here too. I'm interested to see where things go from here, considering the obvious Lia/Remus and Carter/Sirius attachments :D

My only criticism would be to space out your work more - sometimes your paragraphs are long and truth be told, a little hard to get through. But that's just a suggestion!

Author's Response: ah ah ah i am just now seeing this!!! yes there are two girls writing this fic and we thank you SO MUCH for your review we really appreciate it!! also we will definitely take your suggestion to heart, as this is our first fic we've written together and things *might* be a bit wonky at first lmao

but thank you for the compliments!! x

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