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Review #1, by adluvshp Be With You

17th March 2014:
Blackout Battle 10/10

This was pretty awesome! Your characterisation of Remus was spot on. It was very realistic how he felt like his friends would stay friends with him after knowing the secret.
The discussion between the marauders about being animagi was also very interesting and I liked how you wrote it.
The ending was also awesome. It was hopeful and sweet and I felt for Remus. It made me smile. He did have the best bunch of friends after all.
Your writing flowed smoothly and your descriptions were pretty good. I didn't see any major grammar errors either. Your dialogue was fun to read too and you depicted the marauders the way I'd imagine them.

Good work!
--AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
I am so glad you liked it.
The Marauders have always been my favorite characters. I hope to write more stories about them!


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