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Review #1, by LilyEPotter Chapter 1

14th March 2014:
Hi! Poor Hermione! I can't help but wonder what happened to the three of them if they had to leave Ron behind. It's also very interesting that Ron's hand is pointing to lost, which seems to indicate that he's alive? I presume that Bill, Charlie and George are still alive? What happened to Percy? I think you've got both Harry's and Hermione's reactions to Ron's supposed death and disappearance pretty good. I really like how the Arthur and Molly welcome Hermione to stay at the Burrow and that they're treating her as the daughter that she would have become. I also like how Ginny was able to get through to her just like she had been able to get through to Harry.

Gryffindor vs. Slytherin Blackout Battle
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Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I appreciate your input! According to my story, half the Weasley children were killed in the battle. I feel like Hermione would be trying to keep her heart protected when it comes to Ron and his disappearance. Especially since she feels like she 'abandoned' him on the battlefield. The rest of the characters will be introduced in proceeding chapters.

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