Reading Reviews for String Theory
9 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Chivalrous chaos theory.

29th October 2014:
This is amazing! Please post soon, because I need more! :) This is one of the funniest NextGens I've ever read and your characters are awesome! Again post soonnn! :)

Author's Response: i'm so glad you think so! i'll try to update soon; thank you for reading and reviewing! c:

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Review #2, by dasazm105 chaos theory.

27th July 2014:
Hey I love your writing style. Your expressions and use of descriptive language is incredible and you really remind me of Rowling's way of writing! I feel like I'm reading a sequel to the originals..
You may have read "All Was Well" by JustSuperNMenuncle which is fantastic in its own ways. It was never finished though and I think you would create a terrific ending to it. Read it and see if it interests you! If so I'd be happy to make a banner for you. Email me sameaglemont @ gmail. com
Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: i'm honored that you think the writing style in this fic is similar to rowling's way of writing! i've never read 'all was well' but i'll definitely check it out because it sounds very intriguing. thank you for the review, i hope you enjoy the next chapters as well! :)

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Review #3, by Jasmine chaos theory.

26th July 2014:
Well... This Fanfiction is fan-flippin-tastic! (Evident lack of a better word since swear words are banned from reviews)
You've got plenty of original ideas for the plot of this story, and that, my dear friend, gives me the feeling of hope. Hope, there still are people having more brain cells than dolphins, posting their next-generation stories. Sorry for this sarcasm dripping comment, but I'm just tired of looking for a decent story plot with James Potter II as a main character, while waiting for another chapter of my (till now that is, as i really liked your story

Author's Response: yay, i'm glad you think the plot is original and it makes you so hopeful! this fic giving you hope that people have more brain cells than dolphins is probably one of the most original compliments i've gotten :D thank you so much for the wonderful review; i'm really glad you're enjoying the fic so far!

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Review #4, by TheTenthWeasley chaos theory.

20th July 2014:
I am really enjoying this story and the frivolity involved in it. Despite your disclaimer of it being sort of a parody, you're obviously skilled at writing characters with depth and likability - and therefore I've become invested in them.

My favourite line by far has to be this: "I don't need to smile just because d-words like you think it suits me better. And I have better things to worry about." Extraordinarily well put :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you think they have depth and likability! It's great to hear that you're enjoying it so far, and that line was really fun to write, so I'm glad you like it! thank you so much for the lovely review!

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Review #5, by Cappuccino  entropy.

18th July 2014:
I really enjoyed your first chapter. It's well written and properly punctuated as well, which is actually something I'm starting to find is missing in a lot of fics.
I do have the odd couple of questions though, so I'll be continuing this review.
I'd like to know if your protagonist's name, (Clar) is short for something or if it's just Clar.
Also I noticed that she seems to really dislike James for some unfathomable reason, so it would be great if you could elaborate on that. If you're working on it then ignore that comment.
Personally I feel that some of the essence of magic and Hogwarts might have taken a bit of a backseat because of the Wizarding counterparts to muggle things but that's just my opinion...
I really like the band idea though. Very original.
I'd like to see where this goes so I hope you continue writing it.

Author's Response: Clar is short for Clarice, which is probably something I should've mentioned, but thank you for reminding me about it; I'll definitely try to add it into one of the next chapters. The main reason for the dislike between them is their Quidditch rivalry and the fact that they both are fiercely competitive, and the reason for why she dislikes him so much will be elaborated on in future chapters. Don't worry, there'll definitely be more magic later on, but thank you for letting me know! Thank you so much for your helpful comments and for reading and reviewing!

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Review #6, by .. entropy.

16th July 2014:
please update soon! This is already shaping up to one of my favourite fics! I love how you've injected some modern muggle culture and I love love the descriptions of the bands "attempting to bring back riot grrrl, a movement that happened almost 30'years ago" and "hipster-indie refreshingness"
yeah so anyway, I can't wait until the next chapter xx

Author's Response: i'm really glad you like the references to modern muggle culture in the fic! thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #7, by mathildarose entropy.

18th February 2014:
this is so good. I love your writing, witty & smart. can't wait to read more from you.

Author's Response: i can't believe you think my writing is witty and smart, i'm so glad you like it! ♥

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Review #8, by jailbird entropy.

19th January 2014:
This is hilarious! I love your main character. She has so much sass! James and her are gonna be interesting. This is brilliant. Please update soon!

Author's Response: sassy main characters are my favorite; i'm so glad you like her! thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :D

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Review #9, by QueenOfNargle entropy.

18th January 2014:
Why are there not a thousand reviews on this already? Why oh why?
So basically I love reading James/OC fiction, and this one has not failed to disappoint. I live the first chapter and already I'm hooked, Clar is just such a relatable teenager because let's be honest who hasn't got unbelievably drunk and had a hot boy say that's bad for your liver but still proceed to not care. I love the fact that you've brought in modern things, it's just much more cool and "swaggy" that way.
So yeah. This could be the start of a very fun and interesting story friend,and I am expecting a heck of a lot of fun.

KT x

Author's Response: eee i'm so glad you like it! i can't say i've ever had clar's experience myself but it's great that you find her relatable! haha, all the modern things were so fun to add. thank you so much for this lovely review!! ♥

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