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Review #1, by BookDinosaur Looking Back

7th January 2014:
Hello! I'm here for the Eleventh of the Twelve Days of Reviewing over at the forums! :D

Ah, I've always been a fan of Cho, I think she's a really underrated character and she went through a lot in GoF, so I'm really glad that you chose to write about her!

I think the only major error that I spotted was that you portrayed Cho as being in the same year as Harry, when she was actually a year above him. Of course, if this story was meant to be AU so she'd be in the same year group as Harry, then ignore this. :)

This was actually a pretty short piece, and I think it's pretty cool that you managed to convey so much of Cho's life in that small amount of words. I think perhaps it might benefit from a bit more fleshing out, add some description here or there, but that might just be me. :)

I really love how youmade her feel forgotten, how she just can't let go and nobody understands, I really enjoyd how you portrayed it.

All in all I really enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to reading more! :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Been a while since I got on, but I'm planning on picking up this story again! + yes, it's AU:)

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