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Review #1, by AudenPenelope Prologue

17th December 2013:
Hi! Okay, I hope you're fine with complete honesty. First, this story had promise. I don't exactly know how you did it, but you managed to make the narrator seem real in only, what was it? 700+ words? And she's quite intriguing. Also, I quite enjoy that you decided to skip out on the 'I don't like him *drools over unrealistic looks*' mantra that so many of these stories have.
That said, I noticed just a few places that needed editing. At one point, 'I' wasn't capitalized. And the spacing was a little off (I have an awful time with that, too).
I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks =)
Yeah, I'm totally new to this whole fanfiction thing. Actually this is the first time I've tried writing anything non-academic. So I got a bit carried away...didn't pay much attention to the formatting. I'll make sure I take care of that next time.
Thanks so much! =D


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