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Review #1, by potterfan310 Chapter 2

10th January 2014:
Zilly and Teddy have got the best friendship, I love it. He's like a big brother to her I guess and it's so cute.

Poor Zilly having to find out the terms and conditions, I like the idea though about them all going the 'muggle way' for the experience and how all the Potter-Weasleys freaked when she got out her mobile.

Oooh I like that you have Louis as the middle child, with Dom being younger than him, very original and I like!

Dom's personality as a bit of a neat-freak organiser is fab, she's so different to how I normally read her.

I am in love with this story right now and you because it's all so original!!! ♥♥

Out of curiosity how long has Zilly lived with Teddy?

I can't wait to see Zilly and her ten hour drive with Albus, soon be fun :p I'm excited for the next chapter and cannot wait!

10/10
Soph ♥

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much for your review! Yeah, i like to try out new ideas about character ages and stuff when I write next generation because I don't want it to be like all the other fics, I guess. I planned that Zilly was orphaned when she was eleven or twelve and lived with Teddy since then- I did have a prologue of the night her parents died and when she first met Teddy but I didn't really like it, maybe i'll develop it and post as a one shot or something. Thanks so much for such a sweet review and i'm so happy you liked it! xx

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Review #2, by potterfan310 Chapter 1

16th December 2013:
This is great so far!!

Remus is just too cute, poor Zilly though. I love how Remi tells on her and she just shakes it off.

Zilly's characterisation is great, and I really like how it's set out of Hogwarts. There really needs to be more next gen after Hogwarts!

Dom is as mad as Zilly (is that short for something or is it just Zilly?) and I from the sounds of it her and Lysander made a good couple.

Your summary really intrigued me and I can't wait to read the rest of the story, especially if an Albus Potter is involved.

Definitely adding this to my favourites, can't wait for the next one!!

10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph x

Author's Response: Thanks so much! So nice of you to review and such lovely things too... Zilly is short for Eliza which i know doesn't exactly work but i like to think teddy called her it and it just caught on or something. Updating the next chapter now!!! Xxx

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Review #3, by smashed_crayon Chapter 1

16th December 2013:
Wow, this is great! It's funny and sophisticated, and doesn't have that teenage angst/girly edge to it (which I can't seem to stop putting into mine. Woe) Zilly reminds me a lot of myself at the moment too.
Also, the start of this is very similar to one of my stories, chasing madness. Kind of. Maybe. Yours is better. Anyway I think that's awesome.
And one last thing UPDATE THAT ENDING IS KILLING ME!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm updating very soon. I'll check your story out- I'm sure it's just as good if not better! I try not to make the stories too teenage/angsty/clichey because i find it awkward to write, hahah. Thanks for reviewing! X

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