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Review #1, by adluvshp Christmas at Hogwarts

2nd March 2014:
Blackout Battle!

Oh my, this was so sad and beautiful and touching. Your portrayal of George's pain was very nicely done. It wasn't overdone but it wasn't skimmed over either. I loved the writing style you used here of switching between different years' Christmases and the one in the present. I also liked how you wrote Angelina. Her dialogues were so sweet and did make sense.

I was glad George felt better and could understand Angelina's words towards the end. The ending was so bittersweet, it was the best part and it almost made me so sad. Fred was indeed there between them, on the "other side".

All in all, this made for a very sweet and touching one-shot which gave a nice insight into George's pain on losing Fred and him finding some hope again. I don't have any CC for you except to perhaps watch out for your grammar a bit more.

Good job,
-AD
(AditiDraco95)

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