Reading Reviews for Of Padfoot and Prongs
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by XOdannieXO Midnight Ambush

15th July 2014:
This is really good... I cannot wait for you to update ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! I am updating soon I promise. I just need to iron out the rest of the story before I continue. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)


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Review #2, by Alysea Midnight Ambush

9th June 2014:
Hmm. Interesting start here. I look forward to what you write in the future.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) I'm getting around to finishing the next chapter.


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Review #3, by Dr8gn Midnight Ambush

1st June 2014:
Few errors but wow love the of here hope HP falls fast and maybe some Wesley bashing after all everyone knows weasleya hate dark creatures

Author's Response: I'll make sure to take time and read through it again to fix the little errors. Thank you for the review. I don't know about Weasley "bashing" but there may be some conflict in the future between Ron and Scarlett. I won't give away too much though ;) I will be updating soon! Thanks again!


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Review #4, by Blues Midnight Ambush

26th May 2014:
Love it! It's an interesting story, never read one with a half-breed vamp before. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am working on the next chapter now, hopefully it will be up soon. Please keep reading and waiting for my updates!


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Review #5, by poobear Midnight Ambush

13th May 2014:
realy good start keep up the good work. i hope it wont be to long for more chapters please.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am working on the next chapter right now, hopefully it won't be too long. I plan to have it finished after this weekend. Thanks for reading!


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Review #6, by Grim_reaper95 Midnight Ambush

10th May 2014:
Nice concept, update as soon as possible

Author's Response:

Will do :) Thanks for the review!


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Review #7, by Rumpelstiltskin Prologue

31st December 2013:
Hello darling!

I am here for the fifth task of 12 Days of Reviewing on the forums!

I quite like the way you began this. It reminds me so much of reading the actual HP series! At Number 4, Private Drive, a thin, bespectacled Harry, donning his mother's lovely green eyes, was doing something mildly interesting! Sorry, I became a bit excited when I began making correlations to Rowling's work ;).

One element that I really loved about this story was the quality in which it was written. You're executing dialogue (tags and all) perfectly, and there are virtually no grammar errors! I could hug you for this!...but I wont, because that would be odd. What I am attempting to say, in my mixed-up, bizarre way, is that you've done a brilliant job writing this.

As far as content is concerned, I think you've done a fantastic job at melding your OC (Sirius' daughter) into the HP world so far. Harry and Girl's (I don't know her name yet, and will, thus, refer to her as Girl) initial meeting vaguely reminds me a bit of when Harry first saw Sirius (albeit, he was in his animagus form).

You simply must continue this! That is an order, as I would love to read more! Also, if you should consider coming over to the forums (the dark-side), if you haven't already. I don't think that I've seen you around there, but there are so many resources there and a fabulous community that I think you'll love.

Anyway, great chapter...I will be waiting for an update!


Author's Response:


Thank you so much for the feedback. I'm sorry it's been taking me so long to update; I'm trying to get my story planned out all the way before I continue writing it. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so hopefully it will be up soon. I'm really glad you enjoyed my writing. I am trying to keep it as close to Rowling's work as I can while adding my own twist on things. I really hope my readers enjoy this version of Harry's story as much as I do, and I hope you come back to read more! I think you'll like it.

Thanks again!

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