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Review #1, by Rumpelstiltskin Prologue

31st December 2013:
Hello darling!

I am here for the fifth task of 12 Days of Reviewing on the forums!

I quite like the way you began this. It reminds me so much of reading the actual HP series! At Number 4, Private Drive, a thin, bespectacled Harry, donning his mother's lovely green eyes, was doing something mildly interesting! Sorry, I became a bit excited when I began making correlations to Rowling's work ;).

One element that I really loved about this story was the quality in which it was written. You're executing dialogue (tags and all) perfectly, and there are virtually no grammar errors! I could hug you for this!...but I wont, because that would be odd. What I am attempting to say, in my mixed-up, bizarre way, is that you've done a brilliant job writing this.

As far as content is concerned, I think you've done a fantastic job at melding your OC (Sirius' daughter) into the HP world so far. Harry and Girl's (I don't know her name yet, and will, thus, refer to her as Girl) initial meeting vaguely reminds me a bit of when Harry first saw Sirius (albeit, he was in his animagus form).

You simply must continue this! That is an order, as I would love to read more! Also, if you should consider coming over to the forums (the dark-side), if you haven't already. I don't think that I've seen you around there, but there are so many resources there and a fabulous community that I think you'll love.

Anyway, great chapter...I will be waiting for an update!

-Rumpel

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