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Review #1, by alicia and anne Not Another One

13th March 2015:
Aw Harry and Ginny are so cute and adorable!

Oh Harry! Being a little prankster! I bet it comes back and bites him this little joke!

Awww maybe it won't be a joke! I hope that they do have another kid! :D

Do they really want another kid like James? :P

They should totally have a kid so that he can name it those names!! Hahahaha

Poor Albus! Having his parents make fun of his name. :P

Look at Harry being a rommantic! :P

Aw no! I want them to have another one! :D

This was hilarious, Soph! So so funny!

Keep up the amazing work! :D

Author's Response: Tammi hi!

Happy Easter (yes I am stupidly late replying to this)

Another child like James, I'd love it, not sure they might haha.

Oh Albus, I'm pretty sure everyone of the Weasley's (especially James) has made fun of his name, and Ginny too :p

Haha, it's so old now and needs editing but thanks again Tammi *hugs*

-Soph :D

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Review #2, by kassandra466 Not Another One

20th August 2014:
Awe, how cute, I really enjoyed that.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, it means a lot! I'm glad you like it as it was just a bit of fluff/fun to write!


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Review #3, by Rumpelstiltskin Not Another One

17th March 2014:
Hey there, I'm here for Blackout Bingo (20/20)!

Plot/plot arch: This was cute! The introduction set up the setting and whatnot nicely. Christmas at the Burrow by this point in time, I can imagine, would be utter chaos with all of those Weasleys running about. I love that Harry tells Ginny that wants more children, and what I love even more is those names he's picked out. Poor girl, being named Hedwig (though I understand the sentiment). At least if they were to have a boy, his name would be Felix. The ending was particularly sweet ♥ !

Characterization: I think you've pretty much nailed Harry and Ginny, of course, altered slightly to compensate for them being older and having a family. The children are cute, and each seems to have their own individual personality, which is fantastic!

Detail: You've done a great job with adding descriptions in this! Everything comes together to paint some complete images and I think that it ties together nicely.

Emotion: This was sweet, and it definitely made me laugh!

Other/notes: Thanks for the light and fluffy fic! You did an amazing job!


Author's Response: Hi!

Whoop for Blackout bingo :D

Christmas at The Burrow would definitely be a big family affair, I'm certain of it. Poor her indeed, although I suppose Hedwig could be shorted to Heddy, it sounds less weird, lol.

I was a bit wary of Harry and Ginny so thank you!!

Thanks for the review, it made me smile :D


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Review #4, by LilyEPotter Not Another One

4th February 2014:
Oh my goodness, how sweet and how incredibly funny at the same time. I couldn't help but laugh at the names that he had thought up.

Author's Response: Thank you! Harry's got some vivid idea's!

Thanks for R+R'ing!


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Review #5, by iamatree Not Another One

9th December 2013:
I liked this little story, it has a cute little insight into a day in the Potter household. But Ginny was very composed - if my husband said to me he wanted a baby because he had a name I'd punch him in the unmentionables.
Just a quick thing, there are a few grammatical errors which, if sorted, would make it flow much smoother as the reader wouldn't have to keep re-reading to get the correct meaning. But the story itself is fun, keep it up!

Author's Response: Hi there,

Thank you! I think my reasoning for Ginny being so composed is that a part of her knew he might have been joking.

Thanks for pointing that out, it's un-beta'ed and grammar isn't my strong point. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you liked it!


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Review #6, by Bethan Not Another One

7th December 2013:
Aw, this made me smile so much on a day that seems to be getting progressively worse... such a funny/sweet ending! Well done, a great one-shot!

Author's Response: Aww I'm glad. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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Review #7, by newgenerationlover Not Another One

5th December 2013:
Love the story! Literally died at Hedwig Dobby haha

Author's Response: Thanks, haha Harry has some crazy ideas!

Thanks for R+R'ing!


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