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Review #1, by Susan And Yet....

3rd August 2016:
This is beautiful. Wow. I just... Wow

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Review #2, by diresay And Yet....

8th December 2013:
I really like this. Poetic with great metaphors.
Thank you for sharing it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #3, by 800 words of heaven And Yet....

8th December 2013:
Hello! *waves*

This was such a lovely read! I especially liked that it was pretty non-specific about who the two characters were, right until the very end, so if you really felt like it, you could just ignore Malfoy and Weasley, and insert your own OTP. Very versatile!

I loved the way you've structured this. I adore repetition when done well, and you've used it so nicely and to great effect. I liked how each section was set the same way, but also, within each section, you wrote the parts describing Scorpius and the parts describing Rose the same way. It really reinforced the whole "meant to be together forever" thing!

And oh, your metaphors! I'm always cautious about the way I use metaphors because I tend to go overboard once I start, but here, because your piece was so descriptive, it really worked! I really liked the way you blended the metaphors that you were using in each section together, and how you always kept to a theme. Very nice.

Obviously, I really enjoyed this. Fantastic stuff!

Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much! I literally squealed when I saw your review (my first long review EVER - on a completely unrelated note, I officially love you for life!!!). I'm really glad you liked it; my usual style isn't nearly as flowery and I was hoping the prose didn't come off as too stilted. Your feedback definitely boosted my ego (in a good way :D), and I really appreciate that you took the time to review this!

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