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Review #1, by Karou_Marauder Introduction and Prologue

15th March 2014:

Who's this Greene, and why's he being chased?

Ah, I see. He's a criminal, probably being chased by - Aurors or police? He knows how to hijack a car, so I'm thinking he's a Muggle. Right?

Ok, that's weird, the car is going in circles... Is this man stupid? Standing in the middle of the road, he's going to get hit!

Haha, I see now. The man is a wizard, and he's put a charm on the car. Poor Greene, not his fault he tried to steal what was probably the only magic car in the car park. It's a good idea, but there is a slight problem with this - Arthur made a law that you can't charm Muggle objects (if you're going to use them :P).

Harry was the wizard! His dreams always seem to mean something, so I wonder what this one means...

Great start and I can't wait to see what happens next!


Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for reviewing. As you've realised the car was charmed to make the thief drive back again without realising anything was wrong. Hopefully Arthur will let Harry off this time! Harry will be surprised how much Greene has changed when they meet again. Thanks again.

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