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Review #1, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing Chapter One: Anguish

15th March 2014:
Hey!

So this first chapter was nothing what I expected but I really enjoyed it! I loved what you did here... at first I thought we were back in a founder era fic but quickly caught on that they were spirits of some description.

I thought the idea that Rebecca could physically feel pain when something happened to one of her descendents. I think it truly shows how strong a mothers love can be, something we already knew from the the books of course.

I also wanted to say your descriptions were fantastic in this... I could picture the whole thing from start to finish so great job there. The heartbreak when they reached the wreckage was so sad, I just felt gutted about their death once again so yeah. Lots of feels.

So, my only complaint? There's only one chapter! I can't wait for you to update - I hope you do soon! This was brilliant!

Lauren :)
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Review #2, by adluvshp Chapter One: Anguish

13th March 2014:
Blackout Battle 6/6

This was an interesting start to your story. The plot is intriguing and I am curious to know what happens next. I also like your character Rebecca and how she heard Harry's cry and came for him.

Her husband is also an interesting character and I like the couple from what we know of them so far. It was really sad how all their children and grandchildren are dead, and finally James too.

The atmosphere of tension and sadness ever present throughout the narrative was very good and had me reading with absolute concentration.

I liked your descriptions as they jumped straight into the action. There were no glaring grammar errors either. All in all, this made for a smooth read and a good opening for the rest of the story. I liked it =)

Cheers,
AD
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Review #3, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Chapter One: Anguish

29th November 2013:
Selene! It's here! Ah, I'm so excited!

First off, I'm sorry I'm only reviewing this now. I haven't read anything during NaNo, except snippets in the Novel Nests. But I am here and I love it!

It's so sad to hear that they've lost children and grandchildren, being around for so long. And then for it to get worse because James has been killed - gah, I want to cry. *holds James tightly and never lets go*

I love that it's James who has the vampire family. It makes more sense to me because he's the Pureblood (well, maybe not in this...), whereas Lily had no idea about magic or this world until meeting Severus. Also, I can just see him as part of this world more than I can with Lily. She'd definitely be the one who joined the family.

I'm so glad Rebecca came and heard Harry's cry. I can't wait to see him grow up with vampires and how different his life will be compared to canon. It's going to be an awesome read, I can tell.

Cannot wait for the next chapter, Selene!

Sam.

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