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Review #1, by HPManiacs Lot's of Talking

2nd January 2014:
Aww so sweet! This is such a cute story!! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have the next chapter up in the next few weeks!

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Review #2, by Monique The Beginning of a Beautiful Relationship

20th November 2013:
That was amazing! i really liked it! But for next time, it would be better if you could make the chapter a little longer. I really like it so far and i hope you post more soon :) Good Luck

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I plan on making the chapters between 1,000-2,000 words. This was just an intro and I felt really should stand alone. The next one will up shortly. Thanks!

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Review #3, by loonyforever The Beginning of a Beautiful Relationship

18th November 2013:
It was a good chapter, with some good ideas! This is really accurate based on what happened in the seventh book!

One thing- in the last paragraph (the one where Ginny was unable to speak) it was unclear whether Ginny or Harry was talking, but I figured it out from the context.

Keep writing- this seems like a really good premise for a story, and it's good for a first fanfic! I'm a new author as well, and we new authors have to stick together :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! I do, however, see the paragraph you mentioned. I'll have to read what you have written now!

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