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Review #1, by HelgaHufflepuff76 He's a tyrant

15th November 2013:
Hi! Okay, to start, I really love your character Clary. It's refreshing for a sarcastic and real female character to not be so painfully tomboy. For me at least, she's automatically relatable because you didn't open to her being mary-sue. She's snogging a boy with a girlfriend to open, and she doesn't even enjoy it. She wears make-up and seems very aware of her surroundings.
The only criticism I would offer would be that some of the dialogue doesn't really fit in well; it's awkward at points. But otherwise, this is really well written!

Author's Response: Hey,thanks a bunch I'll look into making the dialogue flow a little better ! Really appreciate that you took the time to give it a read!

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