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Review #1, by Marcy The First 'I love you'

21st July 2014:
That was so cute! I love Ron and Hermione!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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Review #2, by Freda_and_Georgina The First 'I love you'

11th July 2014:
For the House Cup 2014 Review
I'm sorry to say that your opening sentence is rather oddly worded, and I had to read it three times to figure out exactly what it was trying to say. I think it's the use of "was looking" and "was having" over "looked" and "had".
I really like how you showed us Ron and Hermione's point of view when they start to realize that Harry left them.
I like that Ron is finally able to vocalize his feelings for her, especially in such a mature way.
Ah no! WHY did it have to end there! :(
--Freda

Author's Response: It really sounds bad, that opening, thank you. I'll have it changed. In my defense, English is not my first language. Not a good apology, but still :) As for the ending, I thought the feelings everybody would have had about Harry right after Voldemort's announcement would have been too hard to picture, I didn't want to ruin them, I don't know. And, as I said, this is part of a bigger fanfic, which, regretfully I admit, I quit writing some time ago, due to my school work and exams. When I started writing this particular scene I never thought I would end up posting it here. Maybe I'll brush it up later this summer, who knows?
Thanks for your review, I haven't got one in ages! :)
--Ada


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Review #3, by Sado The First 'I love you'

23rd March 2014:
I liked the Story. You did a good job!!! 10/10

Author's Response: First review in ages! Thanks! :)

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Review #4, by Roxanne The First 'I love you'

6th December 2013:
I liked that very much, I would like to know have you published you whole text already? Maybe in this site? :) I'd like to read it!

Author's Response: No, I haven't started publishing it yet, but I'm planning to do it soon :) It is a much bigger story, the first chapters are from the moment Hermione finds out she's a witch. Thank you for your review, it really really helps :)

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Review #5, by love_is_magic_ The First 'I love you'

26th November 2013:
Awesome :) I always loved Ron and Hermione and was sad that we never really got to see the depth of their story! Well done :D

love_is_magic_

Author's Response: Well, I do love them too :) and I love you for leaving this review, thanks :D

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Review #6, by Avanell 2 The First 'I love you'

23rd November 2013:
Very sweet story...I enjoyed it :D

Author's Response: well, thank you, you're sweet too :)

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Review #7, by DuddiX The First 'I love you'

22nd November 2013:
Brilliant! You already know that I love it, but I'm gonna say it anyway: I love it! :))

Author's Response: I know you know I know you love it :)) you witnessed its writing, be proud :))

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