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Review #1, by UnluckyStar57 Lone Poor Boy

6th January 2014:
Hi! The Eleventh Day of the Twelve Days of Reviewing is all about stories of the mystery genre, so here I am! :)

Poor Lysander. He's sort of the dark horse character, and nothing works out for him, does it? His brother gets everything--the popularity, the Quidditch, the charm, the girl... The only advantage that he DOESN'T have over his twin is his looks (because they're identical). I hope that Lysander will win at SOMETHING one day.

Wow, the fact that Lorcan is dating Lily and he KNOWS that Lysander is in love with her... That's a low blow. Why is he so insensitive to his own brother's painful shyness? He seems like a bit of a jerk, in my opinion.

This Order thing that the Slytherin mentions is rather curious... Will that come into play more later in the story? I hope it does!

Great beginning!

~UnluckyStar57

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