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Review #1, by Anonymous Long Way Back Home

21st November 2013:
It's an interesting idea... And I think it has potential but 1000 words is too short. You don't give enough backstory for the reader to connect to the characters and then before you know it, the story is over.

I'm sure you've had this idea floating around in your head for a while, but you have to remember that the reader doesn't know what is in your head and therefore is unable to enjoy such a short story. If you were to rewrite it, or add to it then I'm certain it would be a wonderful one shot.

Good luck with your future stories,

Author's Response: Well, tbh, I don't have a backstory. I wrote this story on my phone in the middle of my chemistry test. I finished first and was so bored waiting for the others. So yea, I spent it by writing this story. Sorry if you or other readers were confused :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing this story. Means a lot to me :)


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